This was unbelievably beautiful. It was powerful and beautiful, melancholy and brilliantly descriptive. Your imagery was amazing, and I really loved your use of repetition in your story. It made for a poetic read, extremely lovely. Well done! I really loved your one shot.

I am drowning in my feels. This is so good.

Loved it - very poetic!

beautifully written. love your take on their background!

God I love this! Brilliant work! I believe that our opinions on this pair are similar to some degree. A perfect expansion of TDKR! Love your fascinating writing style! I was definitely amazed by your characterization. Good job!

I felt so many feels they crushed me to death...
But I came back to life cause I HAD to read this again
Even the second time I read this, I cried
I have NEVER cried both times reading something again

Brilliant. You have a fantastic writing style!

i am balled up, my chin over my knees and i can't contain myself. this is so beautiful because BANE and tragic and BANE D:
I'm sorry I'm not coherent right now.

Loved this. I think you did a great job and I would love to read more of this pair from you. Amazing work!

that was wonderful!

Love This!

I loved this! So many great sentences and phrases, and perfect characterization. I love your take on their relationship.

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA FINALLY GETTING TO REVIEW THIS! Totally read this before I passed out Sunday :D!

It's absolutely wonderful and perfect and it says so much about them and it's friggin amazing and I'm SO DAMN HAPPY I WASN'T THE ONLY ONE THAT WAS ALL 'OMFG THIS IS BEST!' WHEN THERE WAS THAT SCENE BETWEEN THEM :D!

Amazing job, my lovely :D

this is great writing!

This may be short and simple but there are so many emotions none the less. Bittersweet. Good job- we need more fic about these two!