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How old are the children?

My gods, that's the single most hottest chapter I've read!

I beg of you! More please!

HOT!

I just read "It's the Heart that Really Matters un the End" and the this - just lovely. You write well, an even the OC are so good, that I desperately wish to read more about them.

Needs a sequel

Soo sweet! It's all soo cute!

i love how the story went about. the two brothers being lovers and Loki and Thor being alright with it. its amazing how Loki already found out about it and is happy for them. i wonder if there will be a sequel to this? it is such an amazing story i can't see it coming to an end after this. .

That was adorable and I had an inkling where this was going! I like those two princes.

I was not prepared for that but loved it just the same.

I demand more! Please? Pretty Please? With a Neko-Loki on top?! I love this You could do a collection of vignettes!3 Great job!

Awwww... that was so sweet... 3
Loki shouldn't pick favorites though, bad parenting points there!
Further, yay for all practices not condoned on Midgard!

Ah the past always repeats itself :)

If you get the inspiration a sequel would be awesome I'm sure :) Great writing I loved it.

I actually liked this one better than the first one. Which really shouldn't make me feel as weird as it does because, dude, I read Wincest. I really do have to admire anybody that has the guts to post ANY kind of incest fic, since it's such a taboo subject. Made me happy to see all the good reviews this got.