Another beautiful and moving story. Wonderful!

Hauntingly lovely.

Hauntingly, hauntingly lovely.

this story is absolutely amazing. very sad! i love how you developed Beru, she should have been more in the films.

I love the way you went into Padmé's reaction - it wasn't really done in the film. And the last line was brilliant.

I can't believe I'm the first person to review this.

That was beautiful. Fabulous. You're a wonderful writer. It was perfect, it...fit.

Good job.

What a superb story. You beautifully captured all of the characters, and the two girls' grief at the end was palpatable. I'm very glad that the killing scene was expanded on; I thought the movie could have done more with it, especially with Padmé's reaction. Great job. I hope to see more stories by you.