You write really well. I'm really hoping for a longer story because you're so good at balancing your action, exposition, and dialogue.

I wish this wasn't just a one shot!

That was a great read. I wish they were a couple.

Yson! You certaintly had me fooled but I loved it. The writing was smooth and I could picture them in my mind. Keep writing...you're really good at it.

i love it it would be amazing if you could continue this piece

wow, that was just... really hot. I loved it!

Also, I'm going to go with that Damon had the same dream. lol (:

love it. love damon and bonnie.

This was really hot and I love the way you write. Idk why this doesn't have more reviews but wow this def lived up to my expectations of a hot bamon one shot and let me tell you I was pissed off right along with Bonnie

Damon planted that dream in her head lol that's my story and im sticking to it. Can't wait for your next one good job;)