Shit just went from zero to one hundred to zero real quickly. Cool story though.

im dead inside.

Amazing. It's so sad because of just how much it reminds me of our own reality...

NOOOOOOOOOO WHYYYYYYYYYYY

Friend:...he did rape Vi-

I DON'T CAREEEEEEE

This... This... I don't know how to describe my feelings about this big, sad... And beauterful story. It's three a.m. already, and I sob in my pillow because of these strange feelings. But this story is wonderful. So many colours, friendship and then, betrayal... I... I'm so grateful to you. Keep up the good work, it's awesome! I believe in you!

THE FEELS! THE FEELS ARE ATTACKING! TOO MANY! WHY SHADOW!? T_T GAAAA! I can't not describe how awesome this is!

I'm such a sucker for sad stories with character death.. Ughn you made me cry! Its true, society is behind most of the suicides. Stupid people won't understand. This makes me remember someone nearby from where I live. He committed suicide after years of beating and bullying, its sad.. But those things happen.

This...is s-so SAD.
Yet it was a great story, I hope you keep writing more :) It was a really well written story, and the detail...wow just wow. Keep it up!

Oh God, this was sooo sad! You made me cry... Shadow...and then he... I love this!

aww this story made me cry

Why must you make me cry Shadow?! Why?!

Omg I'm crying. That was...Shadow just...and he...! *runs off, still crying *

I cried.,.

I dont like shadow dying 3 I hate chaeacter death. Lol anyway thx for posting. Its an amazing story! Keep writing! ( should write vioxred hint hint, wink wink ;) )

I- N- There are no words to describe how I'm feeling right now. Made me cry. I never cry.
That is a wonderful acomplishment.
It was a wonderful story.
CAN I HUG YOU!