The writing was really crisp, and your ear for dialogue (especially Tenzin's) was wonderful. The story dragged slightly in the middle, and the OCs seemed to pop out of nowhere at times, but overall it was a very nice write. I love to find little slice of life oneshots like this, and this one could even be added on to, if you wanted. This fandom's been overrun by mediocre output, and it's nice to find something shining like this.