There was no need for Shirou to surrender when he could have easily killed the man holding Coco with a traced blade from behind. That part was really annoying

I'am love everything of your history,. I'm reading more XD

A beautiful prologue how's your first story i'm reading.
Please scuse me for my bad english XD

You: "Hopefully I can get the next chapter up faster than this one."
Me, 8 years later and not seeing the next chapter: "Damn it!"

Wow, what a cliffhanger to stop in. Really loved the story, your writing was very good and the story managed to mix the somewhat nonsense Fairy Tail storytelling pretty well with some Type-moon seriousness.
Really liked your induction of Shirou at Fairy Tail. Seems like the kind of ambient a "died young and still believing his dreams but a bit older than /StayNight and with some regrets Shirou" would fit and heal in great. Also yeah, being a guild mage would be Shirou's dream job, him being payed (and able to deny it) to go around saving people with his magic.
Hope you continue someday, at least finishing the Phantom arc after this cliffhanger.

Rot my brain with this mindless garbage

Tch, it's actually kind of unrealistic for this Shirou to join fairy tail.
If Shirou was from heaven feel route, then I can see it come true.
However, it's clear that this Shirou was from UBW route, from his background that follow Rin to clocktower, become mercenary to hunt dead apostle, even to his personality that didnt hesitate to kill his enemy.
And you expect this shirou to follow a bunch of happy go lucky in fairy tail? Yeah right.

Holy shit is this real? Someone who doesn’t make shirou weak or seal his power or make him seem like some inexperienced young idiot omfg this is great

Please come back to this story. And use reinforcement on Cana's alcohol.

Please come back to this story. And use reinforcement on Cana's alcohol.

i cant wait for the next chapter, if there is one

just remove the Zentopia arc in your fanfic Universe. I kinda prefer this one.

aaaaaaaaaa not a cliffhanger like that! not right before the story dies

Really good

Man, you are so cruel!
Don't stain Fairy Tail like this!
If Shirou hadn't intervened. Its kinda alright if they just in a crucify state matters but at least alive and kicking but now you removed someone in the picture even he was a useless character.
Even so I still don't understand how Levy levered her feelings to Gajeel.
That guy need a beating to hell itself.