| Reviews for Champion Return |
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ql chapter 1 . 8/15/2019 this is dumb |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2017 This is the best story I've read so far and by far one of the best pokemon story's on red |
Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 1 . 10/3/2017 interesting |
Burning Moonlight chapter 1 . 4/19/2017 please update and finish it.. |
SirBabs chapter 1 . 8/15/2016 PLEASE. I BEG OF YOU Please bring back the story? I'm at university currently and i've been waiting in patience for a new sequel but seeing as you haven't written since 2012 |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2015 Copy |
Rihan K.A chapter 1 . 7/26/2015 Are your story always like this? Haha it leave wanting for more. If you have time please just add a conclusion chapter or make it a full-fledge story, thanks for writing. |
Red chapter 1 . 8/10/2014 What?… |
RandomReview chapter 1 . 12/9/2013 Not the most well written story out there, but the premise is good! I just have to ask...how in the bloody hell is this considered a 'Complete' story? This deserves at least another chapter or two to address the love interests you suddenly presented near the end of the story. Oh well still a decent albeit somewhat difficult story to read. Do hope you decide to add another oneshot or two continuation as the ending is rather abrupt...well very abrupt. |
92fireDemon chapter 1 . 8/20/2013 Errr I don't see any copying and pasting... and i wrote Stepping Good Story btw! |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2013 You copy/pasted some of the story from Stepping Out From A Shadow by 92FireDemon |
Are all the names used chapter 1 . 3/10/2013 Good story. l liked how you ended it because it makes me think what happens next so that i find myself coming up with many different types of endings. |
WTFUSUCK56465 chapter 1 . 10/14/2012 Dude, this stories sucks, you made THE LEGENDARY AND UNDEFEATED TRAINER THAT COULD MAKE CYNTHIA'S ENTIRE TEAM LOOK LIKE THEY WERE CRUSH LIKE A CATERPIE pIkachu tie with Elesa zebstrika |
Lightningblade49 chapter 1 . 9/18/2012 I cant believe this is a one shot now i really want to read the league,this story feels unfinished hopefully you continued this in another fic. |