The title is what caught my attention; it's so funny and at the same time so brilliant. And I never thought I'd like Gaston, but I absolutely LOVED the way you portrayed him. He's funny in the movie, but he's even more so in your piece of fiction. Great job on the writing! I love this story so much!

Does anyone know what happened to the author? It's been years, I hope she's okay.

Wow! Such a great story! I loved this! Can’t wait to read the sequel! Gaston’s in for a rude awakening. He’s gonna find out how hard it really is to be King! I like how you put "I just can’t wait to be king" in there. You didn’t need "just" in there, but it works so well; especially with a Disney story! How about in the next one, use the quote "[t]here's more to being King than getting your way all the time"?

Is that buck The Great Prince?

I think the reason Gaston doesn’t like books is because he can’t read himself.

Yay! They won! And such a fitting fate for Grimhilde. This reminds me of the book "Mira, Mirror" by Mette Ivie Harrison. Have you read it? In it, the Queen traps her sister in the mirror before Sow White's story begins, and it's all from the Mirror's POV. The main character is Mira. I remember reading the name John Stone in association with the Magic Mirror. I that where you got the name?

Something tells me that's not Adam.

What does "Mlle." mean?

No, Mme. Aiguille, Louis didn't die, he moved to Denmark and became the Royal Chef. ;-)

Pretty cute, Snow White calling the bunny Thumper!

How'd you come up with the name of the village? In the animated BatB, Gaston looks to be in his 20s, maybe in his early 30s, and Snow White is 14. That seems like it would be an issue. Great start!

(continuation of my previous commentperfect for each other. Gaston is sexist and has a superiority complex while Snow White is a perfect example of damsel in distress who needs constant saving and protection.

I never thought that Gaston and Snow White are actually perfect

What a twist of Snow White and Gaston, But it seems he does care cause he’s listening to her and promised not to harm the animals she loves. And she likes household stuff, given she was a servant to her stepmother, but she firm in her own way.

I adore it, such a unusual crossover pairing, but I love those the best.

Oh Snow White, all a Twitter over Gaston’s manly body. \\\

Oh wow, I love this. Gaston saved by the enchantress, but another magic lady might show up to cause trouble.

Will you do the original three attempts by the queen? Like, the corset to crush her ribs, and the poisoned comb?

Either way, good start.