Sorry, can't read past 'accusing the CIA of a crime is treason' line... I mean, what the actual f...?

Great start, lousy finish

Just wanted to let you know that the last review, listed as a guest was from me. I don't do anonymous reviews but I was not signed in and did not realise. Just in case you wanted to contact me. Cheers.

I see it has been a year and a half since you updated your story. You sort of promised one more chapter and left it like this. All the grammatical and English usage issues aside, this was an interesting story. What a massive disappointment that you left it there. It reinforces my hesitance to read stories that are not marked complete. It is ok to have a story that does not have a happy ending but to have a story just not end? Takes a story that could have been good and makes it crap.

Sorry buddy, just being honest. Cheers.

Wait seriously? Your writing is great but you seriously ended this awesome story that way? It's just like the show. Great show, has some problems (season 3) but ultimately my favorite show, then ends like it did.

You pick up after the crappy ending to a great show, take us to a point where we are happy with the storyline again and the end with possible one or both of the main characters dying? That's terrible.

Like I said you are a great writer but you and Chris Fedak could be best friends because you both write disappointing endings. But a sequel would make it all better, just like a Chuck movie or new season!

What in the He'll is wrong you? The craziest ending ever. What a waste

Really good story line! The cliffhanger is brutal though! Please continue, the suspense is killing me! It's like the end of the real show! Write on!

Hope you finish the story soon.

Please come back and finish this

Hi! Can you please at least please finish this story? Thank You!

What the helllll at least finish this story one more chapter c'mon

So I need this 2nd 13th chapter ASAP pretty please.

Hello there love this story of yours hope you updated this and you make lot of chuck and sarah stories a lot more.. thank you :)

Just to make it clear was this the last chapter or are you planning on releasing 1 more?

I'm glad that you updated again! You are a very good writer and I enjoyed chap1-12, the plot and everything and not to metion the characters and their personalities. You wrote as if this was going to be the next season of chuck. But I feel that in chap 13 you got the characters personalities wrong like sarah's personality for eg she woulden't first take a bath and then trow a scene like that infront of Banes. She would rather try to grab his gun out of his pocket or whatever and point it against his head and threat him or something if not she wil try to escape. If you write ask yourself first "what would the character say,do,react etc. Not what you want the character to do. The writers personality must not reflect in his characters.