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Midnight Writer chapter 12 . 3/30/2017 The issue you write about regarding Gohan is very real as well as troublesome. There is this thing called unearned guilt that people can have. They tend to blame themselves for things that bad people do. It makes it difficult if not insurmountable to overcome. In Dragon Ball Z, Gohan's father, Goku told Gohan that it was not good Gohan's fault, it was bad Cell's fault that Goku died. Anyway, Goku was able to come back to life via the Dragon Shenron. So Goku did not have to stay dead. Therefore, Gohan did not have to suffer the loss of his father, Goku, to be tormented and tortured by unearned guilt. But Goku made the decision to stay dead. Thereby, it was due to Goku's choice to stay in other world and train, not Gohan's choice to toy with Cell, that Gohan suffered the loss of his father. Had someone told Gohan this Gohan would no longer by tormented and tortured with unearned guilt. Gohan is a pure hearted warrior, which means he fights for justice. So when he gets mad it is a righteous anger that overtakes him. So, his Saiyan side could never become evil and murder people being that it is born out of righteousness. Just wondering...why did you write a depressing story about Gohan? Why not write a inspiring story about Gohan? |
dbz2002 chapter 10 . 10/3/2015 awww I literally cried at chapter 10 :' ) |
Erina chapter 12 . 7/20/2015 Wonderful!Just amazing! |
LightningFireZC chapter 8 . 12/25/2014 i do like the explosion of power, i have always wanted to see that from gohan I dont like gohan getting tortured though :( |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/23/2012 Nicely done with the unexpected rage |
the chosen one chapter 7 . 1/27/2012 well krillen i'll give you a list 1.)he got kidnapped twice in one in one day when he was 4 2.) that day was also the day his dad died the first time 3.)he was stuck with piccolo who at the time was evil for a year 4.)he saw yamcha, tien, chiazho, piccolo die all within the time of an hour when he was five 5.)he went to an alien planet with just two of his dads friends who at the time he hardly knew 6.)he went throungh the whole namek situation where so many things went wrong i'm not even gonna try to list them 7.)he found out his father was staying in space for TRAINING 8.)his mother isolated him from his only friends he had ever known 9.)the whole world except for a select few get infected 10.)his teacher and best friend starts attacking him 11.)his father returns only to find out they have to train for 3 more years 12.)his dad gets heart virus 13.)cell shows up 14.)cell goes on a killing spree he is powerless to stop 15.)his dad makes him fight cell 16.)he loses control 17.)his dad dies 18.)trunks dies 19.)when given a choice his dad chooses to stay dead 20.)the one person he feels he can connect with leaves 20. his haiya dragon dies of whats predicted to be lonliness 21.)he finds out he has a brother whos a carbon copy of their deceased father yeah where did you go wrong i mean how could he posibly be depressed (sarchasim by the way)especially considering after all this he is 11 |
DarthVerus chapter 12 . 8/11/2004 YOU SHOULD HAVE HAD GOHAN TELL GOKU ABOUT GOTEN! I DID NOT LIKE YOU KEEPING GOKU DEAD, YOU RUINED THE STORY. |
blackbodian chapter 12 . 4/19/2004 great story..dont feel like saying much else cause you wrote this over 2 years ago.. |
Son Gohan chapter 4 . 4/19/2004 Icurus appears in Coolers Revenge the movie. |
TheShadowPanther chapter 12 . 8/22/2003 All right! This is sad, but your fic is the only fic I find where Gohan actually commits suicide! Now why is that? *Shrugs* GREAT FICCY! |
Storymaster Caith chapter 12 . 3/8/2003 wonderful story, obviously well written and thought out .. but WHY is it in the Ginyu Force section if it's all about Gohan? i'm confused. Either way, keep writing good fics. |
Guest chapter 12 . 9/5/2002 Great story, I loved it! great great great |
Samara-chan chapter 12 . 8/29/2002 Kawaii! That was such a good story! I love it! _ |
Professor Authordude and EEK chapter 12 . 8/28/2002 PA- *sobbing* EEK- That was so kawaii! PA- *between sobs* Meanie! Why didn't you bring Goku back! EEK- Don't mind PA, she is KINDA obsessed with peeps bringing Goku back to life. PA- *cries more* |
Son Akito chapter 12 . 8/14/2002 oh that was a good ending...I'm glad that Gohan is becoming better. Gohan was just way to evil for my liking. I like the dream with his saiyan and human side. That was great, well I'm glad I read your story and thanks for reading mine. ~*~SSM~*~ |