The fanfic description gave me so much promise. But then I started to read the story and I was dumbfounded. I find it very irritating that Naruto is weak. I despise a weak Naruto in fanfic stories. If I wanted a weak Naruto I'd just watch the canon anime. Fanfic is supposed to give me more than canon, so for Naruto to be even weaker than he was in canon, with his body breaking down, is a step in the wrong direction.

Please dont just please dont
if you are wondering what that means it means do not say discontinued if you cannot avoid using the word then say it with an apology and say it sincerely like "Im very sorry to everyone who liked to read this but it is with a painful heart that this is discontinued"
You ARE WRITERS NEVER let anyone get to you just because of a small flame be strong and correct your errors!~

I am starting this knowing it is discontinued. But hey if you put 150,000 words and a few years into it then I'm going to read it. Thank you for sharing.

It was nice while it lasted.

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nive

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Aweso,e!