| Reviews for Fifty Shades of Damaged |
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gotye chapter 32 . 8/10 The first 20 chapters or so were really good with the exception of some ridiculous over reactions...and i hung in there for 12 more before i had to bail. Too many plot holes. the beginning was good tho, should have wrapped it up before you got lost in it. |
shellz71 chapter 51 . 8/8 That was amazing story thank you |
Ensenada chapter 51 . 7/28 Please don’t write again until you can get spellcheck! |
Ensenada chapter 30 . 7/28 Please, give me a break! Ana a Prima Ballerina , is going to behave like a common street brawler? And mess up her body? And Christian a 6 foot plus can’t push a trollop away? And needs rescuing from a dainty Ballerina? You wrote pure rubbish, words are powerful weapons! |
Ensenada chapter 26 . 7/28 WTF, you don’t make any sense! Grandma? And making Ana, so stupid? First, not confronting Christian about talking to Elena, after the office debacle. And running away, then The Leila gun episode. And then finding Elena at escala, talking again about Ana, and Ana doesn’t say anything? You made her stupid. You aren’t making sense, and you are a very sloppy writer. I like it so much in the beginning, but then it seems that you got tired. And it’s a shame because the story was going well. |
hummergirlnv chapter 33 . 6/17 Personally I think a baby would be the perfect twist to keep the drama going! |
limtse1978 chapter 51 . 6/15 Throughly enjoyed your story! It was refreshing to read a different kind of ana and Christian from childhood until adulthood... thank you! |
Ashley chapter 50 . 2/22 God I know u mean well but it’s so cringe like not in a cute cheesy but in a omg what is with the car analogy and all the unnecessary sap? Ew |
CupcakeW chapter 2 . 11/18/2019 THAT WAS WOW! NEVER READ A VERSION LIKE THIS! BRAVO! |
Guest chapter 51 . 7/27/2019 Has to be a TOP 10 C&A love story. Can't wait to get into the sequel. Thanks for sharing! Denie' |
Guest chapter 48 . 7/27/2019 You...you almost made me wet my pants...No way could these two not be one... |
Guest chapter 45 . 7/27/2019 This is CRAP! Nobody needs drunken strippers to have a good time. And what does this say to your life partner? |
Guest chapter 22 . 7/9/2019 Hey...it's way past time for C to man up and tell A the whole story...please get it over with! Thanks for sharing! Denie' |
Love chapter 6 . 5/12/2019 I love this version! Reuniting stories always pull at my heartstrings! Plus I love how you made Ana as broken as Christian so that they could protect each other from the demons they keep. Overall, I’m in love. YOU’RE SOO TALENTED 3 |
Love chapter 2 . 5/11/2019 Love love love love love love love love love love it so much! |