Reviews for Breath Of Life
derezzcartes chapter 5 . 6/22/2013
OMG I just found this story and it is amazing!
The song choices here were excellent; I always think of Loki when I hear them :3
Ryuno chu chapter 8 . 6/21/2013
Yey new chapter! :D
You did not disappoint. I'm super excited to see what happens next. I hope Loki is done being an asshole.
Princess PrettyPants chapter 8 . 6/20/2013
Nice touch with Willie the Mailman whose delivers the mail to the Fantastic Four and is played by none other than Stan Lee.
SkewedPerspectives chapter 8 . 6/20/2013
Great chapter. The writing was really solid as usual and I can't wait to see whats coming next. I can't wait to see what Loki thinks of this whole situation.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/18/2013
I need more of this wonderfulness! We all do!
Guest chapter 7 . 1/5/2013
I looooooooove this story! L
faeriemaiden96 chapter 7 . 11/25/2012
I am loving the Loki drama. Just saying. Update as soon as you can!
faeriemaiden96 chapter 6 . 9/27/2012
Yay! Romance at long last! I'm excited for this first battle, let's watch Lyra kick some ass. And I love Loki's nickname for her, it's so cute :) May the muses inspire you to update!
Azura Soul Reaver chapter 6 . 9/27/2012
This is an interesting story!
xXxDragonxPhoenixXx chapter 5 . 8/8/2012
I'm so glad she got to see Andrew and Ty. :) Ha ha! I would have loved to leave a voice-mail like that. XD
The-Ugly-Turtleduckling chapter 4 . 8/7/2012
Had to review this just because I fucking love Stabilo's "Flawed Design", and it is such an amazing song for our poor misunderstood Loki. :) Despite Lyra's Mary-Sue-ness, I like where this story is going, and though some of the nasty conversations make me cringe, I'm glad that you are making Loki act like the asshole he has become for the time being. I hate the stories where he is some weak, wimpy, crybaby coward and immediately repents for his wrongdoings, becoming a victim rather than a conspirator in crime. It's nice to see his nastiness now, so we can see his transformation later into the man he used to be (and was always meant to be). I also enjoy the length of your chapters, it's refreshing. Great job! On to chapter 5!
trufflelover chapter 5 . 8/6/2012
i wish i could see Tom Hiddleston and the rest of the avengers act this story out. .
*sigh* i only i was in lyra's place.
ooh... loki CAN be jealous too! :P update pls! Love this story :)
PrettyTempie chapter 5 . 8/5/2012
I like just realized that Ty and Drew resemble Thor and Loki. I didn't see that until I read this chapter. Keep up the great work and please update soon. :)
faeriemaiden96 chapter 5 . 8/4/2012
Thor is just so hilarious in this story. Update!
Nephele.Paints.The.Rain chapter 5 . 8/4/2012
*grins like an idiot* My inner fangirl really likes this story ;) I see what you did there with the bird's nest hair! Also I like how Ty and Drew are miniature Thor/Loki! I want more of them in the future! It would be very interesting. And Loki watch out some of your emotions are showing :P IIIIII NNNEEEEEDDD MMMMOOOORRRRRREEEE!
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