| Reviews for Beneath the Water |
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sora kazega chapter 5 . 3/31/2013 I always did wonder how Mags beat them, in my mind I see her trapping them in her nets, whether it be in water or land and then do them in or leave them to starve. Sadly she ends up like her parent's because of it... but all in all a 6th chapter would be nice! |
Drewmaster chapter 5 . 3/9/2013 Please stop being so addicting. I'm kidding haha, write more! Your writing's been getting better and better! Update soon! |
Drewmaster chapter 1 . 3/9/2013 I've just started reading fanfiction and this is great! Keep up the good work! |
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 5 . 2/23/2013 Amazing amazing chapter! I'm so glad you updated! I keep forgetting how well-written these chapters are. :) It's okay that they keep getting longer; that just means there's more for me to read! For some reason, I always remember this story... I don't really know why, I guess it's because it's the only Mags one that I'm reading. Keep up the amazing work! :) (: Tarah xXx |
Fiona Siona chapter 4 . 11/17/2012 Great Chapter! Heheh, now that I think of it, she does remind me of Liam... Ha, Nick and Mags are perfect for eachother! :P Their both Liam Paynes :P |
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 4 . 10/14/2012 Another amazing chapter! There were a few things I would have phrased differently, but other than that it was good. Keep up the amazing work! :) (: Tarah xXx |
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 3 . 9/23/2012 Amazing story so far! Gosh! I love how you're creating relationships for her ct come back to, and unevitable heartbreak for her fiance. Keep up the amazing work! :) (: Tarah xXx |
laptop246 chapter 1 . 9/1/2012 I really do enjoy the way that this story is written - but I don't really connect with Mags. I really wish I had the time to read this story thoroughly, but I don't at the moment :/ It is definetly worthy of its spot in the Hunger Games Saga. I welcome you to the Saga! |
Fiona Siona chapter 3 . 8/29/2012 Hahah. No. I'm depressed. Poor Gabe. He's gonna DIEE! Except he doesn't know it yet, so that's okay. Whatever, I like Nick more. He's charming, reminds me of Liam Payne. *le sigh* Liam 3 Anyways, great chappie again! :DD |
Lady of Ravenclaw chapter 3 . 8/28/2012 Gawd Torie you're mean. I mean it's motivation, but goodness. Kind of wondering if she's going to end up in an alliance or trying to take it solo. And I liked the movie (finally read the books before going to watch the movie) though the end seems a little quick. |
Fiona Siona chapter 2 . 8/11/2012 That is, like, the saddest reaping I have read about. :'( Great chapter though! |
JenneeGrace chapter 1 . 8/3/2012 Enjoying it so far, and hoping she doesn't end up getting Reaped with Nick because that would really suck. :( My only comment is that you could condense some of your parts into paragraphs which would give the one liners a bit more punch to them. And I've never read a story more focused on Mags, so this should prove to be interesting. |
Rose chapter 1 . 7/25/2012 i love the mags part i really can see her character develop. Keep on writing, your awesome. :) |
Fiona Siona chapter 1 . 7/16/2012 This is really cute! Update ASAP! |
Bree chapter 1 . 7/16/2012 GENIUS... I like this can you give me more? |