Reviews for The Protector's Temptation
PsylentFox chapter 24 . 7/24
Honestly I was really enjoying this, its a shame it hasn't been updated in a while! Following just in case, somewhere out of the blue, it gets picked up again. ;)

I've honestly always been intrigued by Kyoka/Zangetsu swaps in fanfictions, but always the author tends to take it in a weird direction or the writing just isn't up to par... so finding this story was a real treat.

However, while I am not completely surprised to see Ichigo failing to properly utilize her abilities considering they've only been together for a while, it kind of sucks to see so much inner conflict between Ichigo and his new zanpakto.

Thanks for the good read!
koseta.a chapter 15 . 3/27
Adding random ocs near the end... I'm out
Fallen angel Lucifer20 chapter 24 . 1/4
When are u going to update ? Ignoring what some people think, I like this story, as there isn’t many with Ichigo and kyoka suigetsu.
corjca1 chapter 18 . 10/23/2019
didnt like ichigow with some ugly boot and the treated rukia fact you spoult it obersly a hater of rukia
corjca1 chapter 13 . 10/23/2019
didnt like the pairing of ichigow and some trogg fact i hated it ich/rukia
dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 8/26/2019
Interesting chapter and plot and idea
Guest chapter 24 . 8/3/2019
Now I’m certain Author had already given up at this point, been a great read up to ch15~, well done and thank you, hope you would not continue and ruin your stories like this in the future, I’d honestly take 15ch of this story over these24ch cause the story went from a solid 4 to a shaky 2
Jestersky98 chapter 22 . 8/3/2019
The worst of the worst antagonist introduction I’ve ever read in my life, is this story dropped cause it’s obvious the Author hasn’t been trying since around ch15
Guest chapter 18 . 8/3/2019
Seriously? Why are you trying to drag so much angsty drama into a fight which ichigo is able to basically insta win? Fucking pointless and if any reader stop for 2sec and think they’d see how retarded this chapter is
XXxxxadisxxxXX chapter 1 . 7/26/2019
The ending here was...let's just say a surprising reaction.
Reactor-3 chapter 24 . 6/17/2019
Are you going to update...?
zzasdasfas chapter 12 . 12/7/2018
I did like your story. But I am one of those that don't like what you call as "ship-teasing". So yeah, unfortunately, I'll have to stop reading here. Cheers
zzasdasfas chapter 7 . 12/7/2018
Hit or Miss, I guess they never miss, huh? Ahahah

Great story so far, I'm especially in love with your portrayal of Kyoka. She's great fun.
Misaka Phenex chapter 8 . 9/6/2018
i like dem girl on girl action too
Misaka Phenex chapter 2 . 9/6/2018
hah fun fact: i did not know kyouka is a pure kido type zanpakto(sorry if spell wrong) i always though it was melee and kido type combine (again if spell wrong dont complain im not from america or something :D)
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