Author is too stupid. I would say too stupid to live but he or she was apparently still breathing to write this utter garbage.

Snape being an asshole so he can pretend to be on Voldemorts side makes no sense and proves Rowling was an idiot. I’ll ignore this since you are just like most sheep and copy others stupidity as your own. It’s a very common failing. Hope you learn from it. But what is truly unforgivable is how much of a spineless pussy you have harry being. Everyone who ignored him and left him to his torture is being forgiven so easily when they do not deserve it at all. 4 years of snape and it’s all ok? Bullshit. 4 years of wishing and praying to have family to find out the person who was supposed to care for you ignored you. Forgiven in minutes? Bullshit. Forgiving the one who forced you into 14 years of torture and slavery and ignored your pleas to escape? Bullshit. This story is a steaming pile of shit before it even gets going. This harry is either naive to the extreme, a fucking moron, or one of those idiots who gives everyone multiple chances to stab him in the back. No interest in reading this bullshit story with an unbelievable beginning and a main character who should be dead. Harry should just slit his own throat and be done with it. To pathetic to live. Grow a pair of fucking balks. Find other people who havnt fucked you over. I don’t understand this idiotic need to forgive. Cut the trash out of your life, move on, find new friends and such who havnt already proven to be shitstains. Author is an idiot. No respect for forgiveness happy morons. I just wait for them to get taken advantage of again and hopefully their idiocy removes them from the gene pool.

looks like it has potential. enjoying it so far!

This was so good! I've come to expect wonderful things from you, and I really think this story will be one of the best I've read! (And I taught writing for 28 years before I retired!) Yourself characters seem so real, and their reactions to each other just work! That is a wonderful thing, because many writers never ever get that to work in their own stories... I am looking forward to seeing what happens between Harry and Ron when Ron finds out about Harry's Quidditch career! There should be FIREWORKS!

Wow! Fantastically awesome! Great chapter! English National Team wolf, snake and all... I am seriously impressed!

omgomg more more please more

nice

I really enjoyed that but wish there was more to it I like the way you pull me in to the storyline that I did not what to put it down thank you for writing it

I really enjoyed this story so far. Hopefully some day you will finish it.

763 years? Oddly specific.

Emrys? do you know that...It's weird c'us of Emrys...well Myrrdin Emrys

he's running a high fever, 105.7 degrees...Uhhhh that's not possible... Only if it was 105.7 Farenhite

This is a great story ! A shame you didn't continued it

I think its a shame that this ended up abandoned!

this is really awesome and interesting i can't wait to see what happens next please continue!