Omg this is really gripping and kept me on edge throughout the whole chapter, I was like waiting to see what happened next and then u left it on a cliff hanger! OMG! update soon! :D

Wow this is amazing! Please read and review my story

I always had a hard time trying to imagine what it was like for the tributes when they were dying. I mean, their deaths were so barbaric. I think you did a great job writing out what was going through this child's mind as they died.

I've added it to my favorites, because I enjoyed it so much. Great job! Your style of writing is good and overall the story was great!