Amazing!

Oh I love this! I want to squee in delight from the Bellamort tension. I love the way you presented Voldemort, how he seems to be studying her in a way.
I personally adore this line:
"Her perceptions of the world adjusted until the faded grey colours and blurry shapes had found their sharp edges again, and he stood at the centre of everything. " It just shows Bellatrix's obsessive love towards Voldemort.
Really well written! Great work Azzie

Ooh, Bellamort! I love the opening line, and all the water and drowning in here, and the ending is so pretty!

I love it!

This is the wrong fandom! Jk, jk. I'm not that much into anything HP anymore but I still like this! :D I still get kinda shippy again when I read such stuff ;)

I love it! Thank you very much for your gift! "Come now, Bella," he breathed, "surely Azkaban would not have taught you to lie to your master?" This line is my favorite and the final of the story was amazing! Wonderful job!

Oh my gosh, Azzie. Oh my gosh.

That is one of your best pieces - it was just fantastic. I loved the way you manipulated the metaphor of sea to encircle them both. I loved how human you made them both seem, and yet how surreal, insane and ethereal, too.

"Come now, Bella," he breathed, "surely Azkaban would not have taught you to lie to your master?" That line sent shivers up my spine! ;)

I was also very fond of the last line; I liked how you showed some romantic contact without it becoming unbelievable, just the right amount to show how the Dark Lord could be teasing and, from a piece I read a few months ago, "generous".

FANTASTIC, FANTASTIC, FANTASTIC! Ooh, I'm like a child at Christmas! Hello, Favourites!

Omg, Azzie. This was actually really beautiful. (I don't know why I say 'actually', as if it's a shock - it's not, you being such a stunning writer ;) )

But anyway, yes, very beautifully written. I loved the imagery of the ocean, and all that it represented, first freedom, then oppression; and the way you described it all - the ocean itself, Bella's fear, everything - was absolutely stunning.

The ending especially was nicely Bellamort-ish. Though, that ending "kissed the breath from her lungs" sounds so ominously like Voldemort has become the ocean (do you see what I'm saying?) Like his kiss is drowning her the way the ocean would have, and instead of it killing/overwhelming/destroying her, he is instead.
And I loved it.

Anyway, this was spectacularly done, and I'm sure Julia will love it!

This was lovely. Their both pretty crazy characters and I love that you managed not to make them sane like some people end up doing. They've still got the crazy aspect about them.