Adding Yuma as Yugi's cousin was a nice touch.

Do you think you can continue making more of these? Like for example where people start to figure it out and/or Yugi somehow shows his friends

I love this! Great job.

bump in the night is right...

That was really good. I enjoyed it immensely.

*snicker* Yugi is a unicorn. His masculinity has officially died. Oh well.

I...umm... 0.0 GOSH I LOVED IT! . Right matches?!
Matches: Rrrraaarrrwww! .
( In yugi's room)
Yugi: Ok! I think i know how to do this now! *practicing magic with dark magican girl*
Dark magican girl: Ur getting it! U'll impress master vampire yami in no time! . Oh! Hold on a minute * leaves the room *
Vampire yami: Hello there, little rose! I was watching u practice! Ur doing such a good job. * Licks and sucks at yugi's neck*
Yugi: *starts breathing heavily and a erection presses in pants* ooohhh! V-v-vam-p-pire m-m-mas-s-ter? P-please! Let me get back to practice!
Vampire yami: Not right now little rose...i-i need ur body badly...i need to be inside it..to dominate it!
Yugi: *breaths more heavily* Oooohhhh! 'Oh gods! Someone help!'

Dark. Kinky. Sexy. Wonder.

i would love to know what pic inspired this, if their is a link to a copy of it can you send it :)

that was really good! i havnt seen such emotion in a story like this in a long time! bravo!

That was very hot. I wish more ukes find their seme like that. Nice story.

You should really make a sequal or add to this story!

This was certainly different than anything I've read :) Very unique.

Good job!

*NOSEBLEED*
Loved this! :glomps you: :D

That was actually really interesting to read. I adore how you managed to take a common idea and make it unique, and wonderfully written. There are a few homophones and stuff, but it's only a handful.