Reviews for The Wheeled Twinkie
Shootyourface chapter 3 . 1/13/2016
I really love that story! It's interesting...a lot, and now I'm just so curious about larxene's story,God!
I'm waiting for Seifer too u.u I hope that I'll find the next chapter soon...nice work and do your best!
See you next time!
Callista70 chapter 2 . 7/30/2015
I really like this it's hard to find good Seiner fics. I hope you'll update again someday
puruku chapter 2 . 12/14/2012
Aww, it hurts that Axel was the "bad" guy:( and Hayner can be so nice, wanting to move the fight to another location so the others could get on the bus:)
puruku chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Aww Seifer can be so nice when he wants to, he didnt make him run THAT much:)
Drake chapter 2 . 8/21/2012
Wow, this is a really good fanfic hope chapter 3 comes out soon :D
kairi8912 chapter 2 . 8/18/2012
when i was reading it i got sucked in then came the end of the chapter and i was damn it was gettin good but anyways it was very good
Princess Moon Rose chapter 2 . 8/15/2012
It's good. I like! Can't wait to read more.
Toy-Sensei chapter 2 . 8/12/2012
Effin Love it! ;3 I've been craving some Seiner for awhile! Aw, Axel's a jerk, can't wait to see more drama escalate between him and Hayner, especially some Seiner fluff! Can't wait for that to kick in. - Please, keep going! I love it so far!
iNessie chapter 2 . 8/12/2012
Oh gosh, Hayner totally fell into his arms like a girl LOL.
I can't wait for them to start developing feelings for each other fgnjkntjndfert.
Awwww Axel's a douche? D:!
I love Axel QQ.
Well, that's the way the cookie crumbles.
SO I LIKE HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOOON.
AND LIKE HMM MAYBE UR OTHER STORIES? -heartheartheart-
-Nessa
kairi8912 chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
yay new story and seifer as the bus driver..oh this is going to be good
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
ohhh story...i cant wait..yay
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
YESHHHHH! MORE SEINER.

Nice idea btw, Seifer being a bus driver practically had me rolling. At least he's a hot bus driver...not those chubby ones that seem to have breathing problems. Ahem, anyway, good job and I'm looking forward to see all the drama that could happen between Hay-Hay and twinkielicious Seifer ;3
iNessie chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Oh, I already like where this is going!
Update soon!
-Nessa