| Reviews for Shadows of My Heart |
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wolfshifter1001 chapter 3 . 7/18/2012 Poor Zuko just when he found his mother she ended up being died ;; but at least he was able to see her one last time :) and what a cute nickname Ursa gave him! :D well I hope to read more soon! |
ManlyPuddingPrincess chapter 3 . 7/18/2012 I loved the continuation of serendipity! I just loved it and these moments... They're so beautiful. I personally loved the southern raiders part the most, maybe it's because it seems like something that would happen between behind the actual canon scenes. Wonderfully written I must say (: and thank you for replying to my review! And yes, I agree about Zuko not being able to hold down a relationship.. Especially with a person like Mai. Nothing against her, it's just... Them two together never really went well with me haha. |
thelegendarytrollwagon chapter 2 . 7/17/2012 Hey there! I love your contribution to Zutara week and I like your writings style! Keep up the good work :) |
ManlyPuddingPrincess chapter 1 . 7/17/2012 ... Sorry, I was the guest previously who forgot to log in when I reviewed :/ but Im not going to review and just say that. As much as I love zutara, I'm hoping for a tiiiiiny bit of taang and sukka... But that's just me haha, but not everyone ships them together though. I love how you wrote their interactions with one another, and with their current relationship, I'm really glad you didn't make it seem like katara was cheating on Aang... And I was wondering... What happen to Mai? There wasn't a mention of her I'm chapter 2 O: ... To be honest, it would've made more sense if Zuko had broken up with Mai in chapter 2 instead of... Lady Jia... Who I assume is an OC? |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/17/2012 OH MY GOSH! HAHAHA this made me laugh but I felt so bad for zuko ... So many humiliating moments D: haha. And that marriage proposal, kind of perfect for them in a way. Wonderful job on this chapter! |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2012 Currently, the only Zutara week fanfic Im reading. And I must say, this first chapter was really well done! I'm so excited for the following ones hehe. Zutara makes me have so many feels. |
MoonlightHoney chapter 2 . 7/17/2012 Your welcome! :-D The first day was really sweet and I loved the end. But I was laughing my head off on the second day. Everytime I stopped, something else had me laughing even harder; Also on a writers side of view (still working on it. Lol!) you got right what most fanfiction writers get completely and utterly wrong... The personality of already existing characters! It gets me angry when they do that but i cant blame them completely either because I know how hard it is to keep them up to there personality. You showed change in both katara and zuko even aang, without changing them to the extreme. I also loved how you showed us everything that you pictured in our minds with your words like it was a hidden episode of zutara that the creators of atla (insert shaking fist of anger with curses here) decided to change and turn kataang. *crowd applause and moved to tears* KEEP ON WRITTING! Or ill haunt you for life until you do. :-P Sincerely, Moon. :-3 |
wolfshifter1001 chapter 1 . 7/17/2012 Sorry mistakly press review but I love how chapter 2 came out! Poor Zuko, least no one said if he was gay XD and also poor Katara she got the worse allergy ever |
wolfshifter1001 chapter 2 . 7/17/2012 Lol XD I just l |
AnnaAza chapter 2 . 7/16/2012 Poor Zuko. First, they question his manhood. Next, his servant sees him named. Finally, his proposal plan is turned upside down and basically would be put on YouTube and have about two million views if the Internet existed. But it seems the spirits wanted to make a final jape at him before giving him this momentous happiness! |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012 Oh, that was really cute and quite original: I like detailed stories! :D Can't wait for next chapter! |
wach chapter 1 . 7/15/2012 E(x/r)otic! Quixotic! I'm pretty sure you know about how I /feeel/ about this, but I'll leave a note anyhow. Love it and cannot wait to see the way that the different prompts change/shape the flow of your story. Thank you. |
Enchansive chapter 1 . 7/15/2012 Lovely so far! Italics are used skillfully and I can't wait to see what's next :) |
Krys and Mel chapter 1 . 7/15/2012 This was really great! I've read tons of fics today (I underestimated how many submissions there would be when I volunteered to be a reader) and yours is one of the most well-written and developed. You did a great job with the prompt (it's a toughie) and your story was an actual story and not just a paragraph. I can't wait to read Momentous tomorrow! Krystynn |