I really like this report! Did you make up the works cited, the last two works, because they look exactly the same. In fact, they are the same. Except that little tiny space at the end of the first one... I know The Epic of Gilgamesh was one! Great job!

I love it! I wish I could have a copy of that report...
Are you going to do like how the teacher thought it was or an epilogue?

As I said at the beginning, there are different forms of immortality. Fame throughout the ages, or god-like immortality. I wouldn't want the second one. Like Betoven (sorry, no idea how to spell his name), he was famous for the things he made last, a way of structure, or a way of music.

Ohhh-kay. You've lost me a bit...

Aww. I'm still not sure whether or not I should be hoping for his immortality, and really, there are several ways that you can be immortal...

That was nice of them. I'm glad she was comforted. And I know the feeling of being comforted by a male person, since I never really knew my father either.

Very good character developement! They are gradually growing closer in this strange enviroment, and they have already made a new friend. Great job! Keep up the good work!

You've really done your homework! Great job!

Wow. That's really good! I'm horrid at geography, but I have the general idea of where they are. Keep up the good work!

Oh wow. That was totally... wow. I like how you incorporate other books within this one! I spotted a couple of spelling mistakes, though. If you need any help, I'm totally there!