| Reviews for Losing Control |
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Ignisaraignee chapter 16 . 12/27/2019 Hey, excellent story and I look forward to the next update I can’t wait for McCoy and Kirk to meet her, also I just wanted to let you know that you’ve spelt sighed like sighted in most chapters. |
Lola chapter 16 . 10/3/2018 Hey there. This is such a good story! Maybe the best one involving Spock I have read so far (and hes my favorite). I really wish you would come back and continue it! :) or write some other star trek fiction..? you are very good at it! I would have never known that english is not your first language! also the whole premise for this story is so brilliant and original and also fits in perfectly with TOS. Althea is a great character and youve come up with a very believable way for Spock to actually enter into a romantic relationship that does not seem far fetched or out of character. You write him and really all the familiar characters very well. I hope you will still get this comment and I very much hope you will come back to writing fan fiction! Please please please ;) LLAP |
Guest chapter 16 . 2/8/2018 Very well constructed story and enjoyable to read. I was 16 when the original Star Trek started and have not checked out fan fiction for a few years, so I just found this. Well done. I does seem that a final resolution chapter is missing. I hope you didn't give up due to a lack of response from readers, |
Sephraim Annatau chapter 16 . 8/19/2017 I would love to see you continue to write this! And I love the whole premise and idea behind it. |
Uhura the 9th chapter 9 . 7/21/2017 Hello? Where is Uhura? Gene Roddenberry proclaimed their relationship! She is the only one qualified to take on Spock,thank you! Well anyway the story line was good, I like Sarek and Amanda relationship in the story. |
Firewolves16 chapter 16 . 6/27/2017 I just found this and i want to read more! |
MuffinTopCrumbs chapter 16 . 2/20/2017 Please update |
Weelou23 chapter 16 . 11/9/2016 This is brilliant in loving it, its very well written and the characters are wonderful, desperately waiting for more, lots of thanks for such a good story. |
mistyluc chapter 16 . 7/28/2016 i do hope you find time to go on with this |
kbake.52 chapter 16 . 6/17/2016 Nooooooooo! I've finished it and it stops right before we meet Kirk! Please please please don't leave me hanging, this story is too good to become another dead-end! It's really heartbreaking finding an amazing story like this and not knowing how it ends T_T This is amazing, you are amazing (don't worry about your spelling, I'm the same) PLEASE update soon! Lots of love from your anxiously waiting fan :D XOXOXOXO |
kbake.52 chapter 15 . 6/17/2016 Aww this was short but sweet. Spock is so cute! The next chapter is the last one you have written in a couple of years . . . please update soon! This story is amazing! |
kbake.52 chapter 5 . 6/16/2016 You did well with this chapter, don't stress. I think the characters were very believable and, oh boy, I love their interaction :3 things are getting good! |
Resigned to wait chapter 16 . 8/25/2015 To my fellow reviewer's question, it doesn't seem likely that an update will come anytime soon. I've been reviewing for over a year and have been met with radio silence... Perhaps if more readers reviewed we might motivate our author to continue?... |
makaem chapter 16 . 8/22/2015 I really enjoyed this. Any chance of an update? |
Missing you chapter 16 . 5/6/2015 Do you realize it's been almost a year since you updated? I read your story avidly awaiting each update and reading it the moment it was up and now nothing... This story has real potential and I'm sad to see it stagnate forgotten... ***If anyone else reads these reviews please post your support maybe if we get enough of them we can convince our author to continue *** |