I enjoyed your take on this theory, it was really cool to see it play out differently. I hope you'll add more chapters, or make a sequel.

hatchiyack still hurting goku NO IT...CANT BE. Hatchijack killed goku. Gohan said cries DAD NO NOOOOOOOOOO. HATCHIYACK YOU KILLED MY DAD NOW I REALLY EXTREMELY Mad ahhhhhhhh gohan letout roar of angry and transform into super saiyan 3

HI GUYS.
This is a very good start, I am looking forward to the next update (tomorrow?). Just a couple of comments of constructive criticism. Firstly, you misspelled "bizarre". 9th line. Secondly, you used the word Arcosian a lot. I think you're afraid to use Frieza's actual name. He is not voldemort. But seriously, you don't need to use euphemisms for character names so much. Thirdly, Gohan's hair changes colour a lot. Like, seriously. Fourthly, there are not enough female characters (only one). This is not sufficient. Fifthly, not enough diversity. Where are the space ethnic minorities? Sixthly, Gohan is six! and he's fighting a bad cold guy. You have not considered the health and safety implications for this. You sick bastard. (sorry for my language) Gweilch gan sosban fach anabl. Apologies again for that. Your hair does get some good points though. Also your cat.
Regards,
Brachiosaurus

uh... why didn't they go to the ship Goku used to get there?

Awesome. Good to know that the Dragon ball Fandom isn't completely dead yet. :D Gohan is my favorite character. Is Piccolo gonna be brought back, or is this the final end of the Nameks? And is Gohan gonna travel through space for a while? Well, I'm looking forward to reading more of this. Have fun with your writing. :D

Awesome story and plot! Please update soon! ;)

Nice fic. My only complaint is that I wish your chapters were longer.

Damn it goku, I always hated how stupid he is sometimes and he actually stops gohan from killing Frieza, still gohan handled him pretty easily so it's okay. I love this story idea, I never liked goku as the main character he is just to stupid, he doesn't have a character beyond being happy, stupid and his love of fighting, Gohan is so much better then that.

Why would vegeta be an antagonistic? In canon he was in near the start since his goal was to kill frieza but then after that he was a pretty normal guy even though he was a huge asshole(in a good way) he wasn't an evil guy. I don't see how gohan being super instead of goku would change him much, he would be even more pissed about it and he would make becoming stronger then gohan his main goal instead of being stronger then goku like in canon. Or he could be even nicer since gohan is only 5 so him being super is incredibly crazy so vegeta might believe the legend about the super saiyan and think of gohan like a god/king or something. Beyond those two changes I don't see how he could change much more.

Is piccolo really dead? I liked him and since all the nemekians are dead if he is dead then there are no more wishes ever again. So everyone will stay dead.

You mentioned that things will be different due to this change on namek so I am wondering what about trunks, he wasn't really from their future he was more from a parallel universe so would he still come back in time expecting the normal canon events to happen?

Will gohan's pod go somewhere else and he will end up on the planet where goku learned the IT? If the others are gone already it makes sense that he might not be able to get to earth and the IT is an incredibly useful move.

I love gohans personality and how he was ordering goku and vegeta around and I hope he acts differently from his canon self and he should since he is now the most powerful being in the universe and he is only 5, I wonder how that will effect his personality.

There is so much stuff I wanna comment on that I love in this story but that would take to long so I will only point out a few minor things that weren't great.

I know frieza is not that smart but he actual told gohan that his plan was to distract him long enough for the planet to blow up.

When using the Masenko-HA he doesn't put his hands on his forehead he puts them above his head, sometimes it looks kinda like it's on his forehead since gohan was young so he had short arms and a huge head of hair.

Did they leave Piccolos body? Even if he is dead he was still their friend(sorta) so it seems rude to just leave him.

How strong is gohan? Turning super makes the person about 50 times stronger then their normal selves and goku after being healed in canon was around 3mil so he was much stronger then frieza after turning super but as far as I remember Gohan was only around 300-500,000 in canon so even if he became super at that level he would still be weaker then freiza, did you switch it so gohan was 3mil and goku was 500,000 or something? Goku going from around 90k to 3mil after being healed was pretty crazy so making him weaker would work. I think a power level chart would be great, the power levels are pretty messed up later on so you wouldn't be able to use the real numbers so it would be best to just make your own but it would be useful to be able to see how strong everyone is.

What is the pairing in this? I know that is far off if it even happens at all but I just hope it's not videl since she is used in 99.99% of the stories on this site and I know it is the canon pairing but the point of FF is to write stuff different from canon, and since his personality is different she wouldn't even fit him as well as in canon.

I am going to end this review now since I don't want it to end up being to long, I love the story so far and I hope you update it soon.
Good job so far.

Oh also question is there gonna be Piccolo Gohan father/son/brothers/best friend stuff or was just the moment he died? Just curious.

Wow you're doing great. I am really loving the story and in have the feeling it's gonna end up really cool. One minor critic Gohan is only five or six by anime standards and maybe even younger by manga. That is not exactly a preteen. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Great chapter, looking forward to the next 1.

Interesting...I guess Vegeta being vaugly nice is from the fact they need to work together to get to safty...

Gohan-sama! ahem... Great job! :D

Really good and the story is seeming more fluid now. But I'm not quite sure how I feel about evil Gohan.

nice a four year old is ordering around ground men