Love it and seriously wish it was a bit longer

I love this story and I hope you do a sequel.

The story would have been better if they had a son not a daughter

I wish they had a son not a daughter

I NEED MORE

so cute! 3

Lathyrus? Oh, that poor, poor child! LOL!

as a total snarry fan i love these stories and though i see a spelling mistake here and there i just love to read this. may i suggest that you bring all of your work to archive of our own? thes have the most tolerable terms about fanfiction and are quite supported by ppl worldwide and have many fanfiction archives already swallowed which may include your work as well. though i cant remember seeing this story on there. anyway, a lovely story with 2 of my favourite snarry tags, bottom severus and creature severus. thanks formwriting this amd sharing! also do not hesitate to write ppl if you need ideas for your stories like hairy snape, which is brilliant and i hope you will one day complete it.

Wow

I love a bottom severus and the baby is so cute.

I really liked this. I wish there were a few things expanded on. Like Severus and Harry escaping the dungeons, why didn't Severus escape on his own after he was taken, was he waiting in case he could recover hos spy position? He then decided to escape to keep Harry safe? That's what I assume at least. I also wish it was longer there at the end with news of them dealing with their relationship coming out. Overall I still like the story.

Great story thank you for writing it!

Damn but that was an amazing story I loved every part of it from beginning to end. Anna

What started to bother me was the inconsistancies. The fic starts off mentioning Sirius having died 3 weeks ago. Harry's mourning is completely skipped over and it's like it doesn't affect him at all. Then Severus just takes Harry and escapes from the dungeon with no mention of the reprecussions of losing his position as a spy. Also, why was Petunia spared? These are Death Eaters and Bella is insane. She should have died.

I assume this was written before the series was complete, but that doesn't excuse the extremely anti-climatic way Voldemort died. It feels like the thought was 'I don't want to deal with him, so "poof" he's dead!' Also, how did it jump from just after Sirius' death in Harry's 3rd year to Newt preparation in 6th year? There was no talk of this time jump.

Then there's the out of character way the two of them interact during the entire fic. Snape isn't up to par with his snarky, biting nature and Harry has mysteriously lost his hatred for him. When writing a pre-made character, you can't just toss out aspects of them that you don't want to deal with. I'm also disappointed that Ron and Hermione, who are so important to Harry, are completely ignored and basically don't exist anymore.

I feel this should be labelled as a plot-what-plot, because I honestly can't see one. I'm sorry, but I couldn't even finish reading it. I think it needs a rewrite with a lot more love, logic, and detail put into it.

Nice