"W-w-w-wow," she sputtered after reading an incredibly hot piece of fanfiction.

Mike may have left the boat feeling like hell, but boy did he have a lovely time when he returned!

You have a real sense of all these characters. You've successfully told a story about Kellerman's guilt and angst using his vocabulary. It is amazing to me that your writing always sounds like the character.

You are very talented. I hope you are writing stories with your own characters too. I'm sure they would be intense and intimately drawn.