i like the last remnant.. and i love david/irina n rush/emmy couple..

I can see that you invested a lot of time on this, but the best thing to do would be get it thoroughly betaed by a native English speaker. They could set this out in a way that would make it read much more naturally in english. A good effort though, especially if you aren't that well versed in english.

David is as sweet as ever! SWEET! (try to pronounce 'sweet' as Rush does) :D

Goodness, I like the idea of Emma asking Rush to take care of her daughter. This story is amusing! It really satisfied my soul that wanted Rush back alive (to TLR world). I missed you, Rush! Then he came back in this story as energetic as ever 3
I especially love the conversation between Emmy and Rush.

I am really glad that this story is written in English! :D