Reviews for Naruto: An Alternate Path
Lordpenis chapter 1 . 6/14
Not a fan of harem, but at least it better off than most harem fics. The other parts of this fic can help me look past the harem element. Good thing it wasn't shoved down our throats. That would've killed the reading experience for me.
SarevokDothrakiDovahkiin chapter 1 . 4/23/2019
Hallelujah finally someone who has the bright idea to kill Sasuke and Sakura during the Chunin exam.
SomeGuyFawkes chapter 1 . 7/1/2018
Too much tell; not enough show.
Wish fulfillment fics can be good, but they still need a coherent plot and a believable character arcs, not Gary Stus that get cheap arbitrary power-ups.
michumichu79 chapter 1 . 4/10/2018
MUY BUENA HISTORIA MAGFIFICA YO TAMBIEN SIEMPRE ODIE QUE NARUTO FUERA TAN IDIOTA PORQUE NI EL MALDITO TERCER HOKAGE, KAKASHI Y MUCHO MENOS JIRAIYA HICIERON ALGO POR EL SINO MENTIRLE
BorderLand chapter 1 . 12/21/2017
He trolled a nation, got all the hot girls, become rich, created an empire, saw the world burn and now he is reviving the Uzumaki clan.

This was beautiful, and the fact that dead can watch from haven is great because now Hiruzen and all people in Konoha except Anko, Hinata and her sister are watching Naruto live the life that they would never have.

Kushina is rolling on the ground congratulating his son and Minato is weeping in a corner with Hiruzen and Jiraya.

Ononoki is most likely shedding a tear of how proud is of Naruto, I wouldn't be surprised if A and Killer B does the same.

The only bad part is that Kurama had no chance to this great life but sooner or later I am sure Naruto will visit him and befriend him at least in my mind.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/23/2016
it was nice
l4w chapter 1 . 3/19/2016
I actually like Hiruzen but I can see this happening.
Well, I can see the start, the rest is Naruto's amazing luck.
Great read
Thanks
Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 10/5/2015
Pleased to see Naruto who doesn't forgive everybody who wronged him and lied to him.
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 1 . 5/2/2015
This Was Awesome :) I Mean, Naruto Leaving Konoha And Ending Up Happy, Heck Yes!
shushanepa chapter 1 . 4/29/2015
Frankly speaking this great story deserves much more reviews.
MWRANDOM chapter 1 . 9/23/2014
Good work. Quite an interesting one shot.
ElementalMaster16 chapter 1 . 9/9/2014
pretty cool fic!
SapphireFox9 chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
This is a gray concept! Loved the ending. I always thought "What the heck!? Wouldn't Naruto's parents have had a will leaving money and a place to live to their son!?" And you just answered my question. Currently I am listening to a piano playlist. The funny thing is is whenever a sad song would come on a sad moment would happen. Then whenever a happy moment or funny moment would happen a happy song would come on. Please make more stuff like this!
revetwrot chapter 1 . 6/3/2014
It's nice to see fic where Naruto declines to be a ninja after failing the exam the third time, or just declines to a ninja period. There needs to be more like this one, but maybe more story than just a oneshot.
GJMEGA chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
You know, it shouldn't be the lying that got to Naruto, it should be that the villagers were stupid enough to not only think he was the Kyuubi, which is like thinking the cage holding the tiger at the zoo /is/ in fact the tiger itself, but that they would then be /insane/ enough to actually provoke the supposedly all powerful demon just waiting to break loose from it's prison in the shape of a small child. That and the fact that the Hokage didn't stop the abuse are the /real/ problems. And don't tell me he couldn't, he's a /military dictator/ of a /ninja village/ in a world ruled by feudal lords for god's sake! A few rather gruesome public executions would have stamped that shit right out.
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