great job. it was a fun read.

I have read this story over and over. I never tire of it! Thanks for sharing it.

So creative!

Awesome first chapter. I can’t wait to keep going. So glad I found this story!

Oh, this was indeed a lovely fic~

Nice story... keep the good work up.

By far the best Snape story! Loved it so much. Such a brilliant ending! My heart ️

Hi Prince Phoenix!
What I enjoyed reading your powerful and wonderful story!
Should be like this,that last chapter would be finished,but unfortunately no...
Thank you so much,for me make laugh and cry at the same time!
Im going to put this story on my favorites!
See you next time!
De Portugal
Carla Cascão

just want to say, I really loved this story. its not everyday I find an amazing Severus/OC story like this. the characters, the plot, everything was simply amazing. even tho I found a few spelling errors, it didn't stop me from reading the whole story. amazing work!

I've read hundreds of fanfics, so I consider myself a good judge of quality. And this one is so good, I will be reading the *whole thing* again - all two-hundred-thousand-plus words of it. Then I'll be checking for other stories you've written!

I think you've done a great job with a Severus love story - not just the ability of a woman to slowly work her way into his heart, the ability of Severus to realize that it can still happen - but all the ups and downs as he wavers between opening up to love and closing himself off, and all the misery involved in his membership in Tom Riddle's cult. (I too had the idea that when he falls in love again, and his affections are transferred from dead Lily to a living woman, his patronus would change form.)

On the lighter side:
I'm amazed you wrote a whole story within the Harry Potter universe, and only mentioned the boy himself a handful of times.
I truly enjoyed the "yo mama" jokes!

I hope that given your skill with writing inside Rowling's universe, someday you'll become the well-known author of books in your own universe.
Best wishes,
Pat*

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A wonderful story. Thank you for taking your time to write it. Love it

Enjoyed this story very much! Thank you. Love Snape stories with wonderful muggles!

Awwww. This story is so heartwarming. It is very creative and follows the plot. it deserves more reviews.

Really enjoyed the first chapter. Excited to move on and see what happens.