Ok seriously, if you're not going to continue this or rewrite it, you need to give it to someone else. This is way to good to just abandon.

I enjoyed this fanfic when you still worked on it, enjoyed the concept it presented, and look forward to the day you pick it up again for extensive tweaking.

How could you drop this story! It was great!SL

I'm sorry to see this fic end! :( I've only just discovered it, and I absolutely love it. I love alternate reality fanfiction like this. Well, it's not so much alternate reality, but it's certainly different! :D It makes me really think about the characters.

I REALLY hope you decide to continue with it someday. It had so much potential and I would have LOVED to keep reading it. I was really sad when I got to the last chapter.

What I think I liked most about this was that you got to know the Inner senshi better than Serenity. In the beginning, she was more like a person in the background. I found myself identifying more with the senshi than her - something quite rare with me.

If you ever decide to pick up this story again, be sure to let me know! I'll be the first to read it. :D

Loo

WAT? U HAV GOT 2 B JOKIN!

u CANT discontinue this story jst because a blind reader is bitchin off at u!

this has GOT to b one of da best fics ive ever read! KEEP GOING!

...:'(...please dont discontinue it...

I am very sorry to see that you have discontinued this story because of a single reviewers opinion, as I was enjoying it imensley!

I do understand however, that if your hearts not in it anymore, there would be little point in continuing- its still a shame though- the idea here is brilliant, I loved the details, the characters and the situations into which they had been thrown - it seemed to me, to all be coming together quite nicely!

Lovely work, really lovely - I do hope you decide to continue with it one day-make sure to let me know if you do!

-v

WHAT? Your not going to keep going with this fic? THATS JUST MEAN! I love this one. Evne after my computer crashed with all my favorites(and this story one of them) it took me a LONG time and LOTS of searching to find this fic. again and your not going to keep WRITING! What ever that Bones girl said is wrong! I like the plot. Its good! You really aught to keep writing this story. Trust me! Its too good. And if need be elaborate/rewrite some chapters. But I think they are fine...dropping the fic. *stomps away groumbling...* That is just mean! I want you to keep writing! *pouts* please?

Very interesting story, but when I clicked the 'next' button, I got the stupid 'site experiencing overload..." bla bla bla, so I guess I'l have to come back later!

You actually have a fialry good plot line going on. (Like in HArry Potter kinda) the girls must go through school, to clean up the world they live in and destroy Chaos properly. To do this they meet, interesting people on their way, and go through a school to be higher in status. Keep working on this story. You will See, is does tie to gether fairly well. (Mine on other hand...)

WOW. That's all i have to say about it. What happens when the girls discover that their amulets and Silvra's crystal are their transformation gems? Or are they? tell tell tell...

But this was a good story! This is unfair!

Aw! No! You can't stop this fic! *pouts* I won't let you! Obviously I have no control over this, but I would really love it if you would continue working on this. Some of the best stories have plots that only emerge later on.

And yes, while you do have a lot of description, that's great. You're doing what a lot of fanfic authors have problems with, painting with words. It's nice to see someone who wants their work to come alive.

I came to a few conclusions while I've done my little writing on ffn and one of them is that you should only write for yourself. Who cares what others think? Writing for others severely limits originality. You've written a fic that strays from the norm. There's been so many SM fics its hard to find one like that. Inspiration comes on, but that doesn't mean you can't develop the characters at least. Come on, in real life nothing happens immediately.

So just anyway, this was just a little encouragement to continue the fic if you feel like it. I think it's fantastic and I know I'm looking forward to more of it if possible. If you ever need an ear to run ideas by or something, feel free to IM or email me sometime.

Keep it all up!

I realise that, although this fanfiction is not as good as Dream of Reality, it actually does have a plot; I respect your decision to stop this wonderful work of art and rewrite it in the future, and with whatever decision you make, I will support you all the way.

Realise that I hardly ever review fictions, and that, even if this does not compare to some other works I have seen, it is still a shining jewel in its own right, and I, to put it bluntly, /love it/.

I don't think you should stop such an amazing piece just because of one reviewer; I know that, unlike me (I tend to beg people to critique my fic...and don't listen to praise), you might be a bit sensitive to 'butchering', but realise that Susan Bones is probably only trying to help you. I beg you to reconsider your decision and continue this fanfiction!

If you're indecisive, just take a break...please? I would hate for this story to be discontinued...

~Nilladriel, shi no tenshi

Girl, you have got to be kidding right. Your story is one of the very best that I have read and I love to read on . Don't stop your story and something that I can tell that you put passion and your whole heart into every word, paragraph, page, and chapter. So one single person thinks your story is boring, so what. Forget her. She wants you to stop. I think that explaining detail makes a good author. Explaing detail and putting your heart into it makes a totally awsome and talented writer. Did the writer of Lord of the Rings give up because a few people thought he was crazy about what he wrote? No, he put it behind him and kept going and even after his death his books are still selling like crazy and even movies. The same with J.K. Rowling. She started off slow and is now world known. Don't let some nobody reviewer who won't even put in a signed review on your wonderful story make your go back to the drawing board. Look at all the people that are cheering you on compared to the one or two that are not. PLEASE, I'm begging you. Don't stop. You have a great talent and a good heart. If one, think she knows it all Susan Bones is going to get you down and make you start all over, then Hun, you are not going to get very far in life. Please, I'm not saying this because I don't want it to stop, I'm saying it because you don't need to stop. I suggest that you get on to your account and delete that negetive feedback and FORGET about it.

Good Luck and make the right choice,

QueenofMercury

Makura

I don't know if you stopped because you wanted to or because of what Susan Bones said but you should read her work. It's nothing compared to yours. Don't let a writer who's probably jealous of your talent make you quit.