also I didn’t read the story. I checked chapter one to see what was going on. A violet eyed vampire? That’s when I skipped to the end because I knew this would be a story full of BS

and then I skimmed the last chapter to see what you did and gave Bella twins with stupid names. This is story is so ridiculous

The best part of this story? They all died.

This was worse than Breaking Dawn and that’s saying something.

I’m sorry but Aeden and Korra as names? HAVAHAHAHAHAHAH that’s the funniest part of this story.

No, actually. It’s Bella becoming human again

Or actually this whole fanfic is a joke.

Congrats on the funny joke.

Aeden and Korra. Twins. Human Bella again.

Hahah ahah hahahahaha

Good story. Please do a sequel.

WHY was this listed as "Humorous?

wtf?

Please tell me that there is a sequel that you have planned because the ending was not nice I would like to know that happened.

I have never did be this but this story SUCKS! Why would you classify as romance/humor. Nothing funny or romantic and has the worst ending ever. You even made it appear that there would be a sequel and you completed in 2016!

What the fuck was that? Endings like this is why hell exists.

the first part was REALLY REALLY GREAT but...the ending WHY?

The story was fir the large part good, however I am confused by the ending. Sequel?

Wait what? That's the end? What happens, everybody dies?

Fuck this

i have no words.. the story was amazing, but... but... but... i.. i need to know what happens next, looking forward to the next up dated story?

Wha...? Why?! Why?! Good story but...the ending...

I'm sorry but I've got to stop reading this...it makes me mad and its soo silly...