I know the story's already done and that I don't really have a vote in this, but I hope yall didnt choose to kill them off

That's it? "I'm sorry and can try to make it up to you blah blah blah..."
That's IT!? Just like that she forgives him for all the pain Sam caused Makkena?! Dude her feelings for Bee was deep, but this apology is just so shallow !

Oh frag yes! You better hide aftpipe, your girlfriend's coming and she's going to kick your whore aft!

Yeah, I gotta agree that wasn't the best chapter ending. *Shrugs* But at the same time another part of me is like.
*WHO THE FRAG CARES?! IT'S ABOUT TIME THEY GOT THAT SLAG ROLLING!*
So yeah I still liked it.

Okay so I don’t know why a couple of people have said this story is boring. Yeah, it might not have the best grammar but you went through the trouble of writing it and the plot was great! I really hope you know that you’re awesome at writing and I hope you continue to do so in the future.

This fanfic is so...boring.

Truly an amazing FanFiction! I really hope there's a sequel to this soon! Thank you so much for writing it and have a blessed day! XD

I'm loving this story a ton, so I would LOVE a sequel! XD

Okay... What did I just read?
If this is an self-insert then it would have been nice to know beforehand.
Your writing is good and you have a fluent style but there is a dangerous closeness to having a Sue protagonist in this story. Keep out for that in the future.

;)

I love Smokescreen in transformers prime ! And great story too! :-)

Loved your story , now favourited!

McBee.

Hey I just wanna say I love! Your stories! And I want an amazing author like yours opinion. I've wrote a bumblebee lovee storey, well I say have when in reality I'm still working on it. I wanted to know if you'd read it and give me you honest opinion on it. Please! If you do then thank you soooooooooooo much! If not, eh. You ate amazing writer!

Fucked up. Seriously. In the movie for the conclusion of the series, they kill Optimus! *pouts and sulks*
... Neva heard of it. Sorry.