I like how you played off the phrase, keeping everything tied together. The whole story was heartbreaking, but enjoyable and well written. Good job on it.

I like how you played on that phrase the entire time. It gave the story continuity. I liked the end, the 'silently begged for someone th stop him' and the 'thinly masked despair'. Actually, the first three of the last four paragraphs were all awesome.

You write beautifully from Loki's perspective!

So awesome! What a great piece you have here. I love the insight on Loki's character. Well done!

Oh god oh god oh god oh god... just... oh god... Lokiiiiiiii... you have rendered me incoherent...

Ok, I think my brain might have started working again, ehehe:) This captures Loki's mindset amazingly, or at least in my opinion since I've always imagined him feeling this way. I've just never been able to put it together in words like this. This is beautiful, I seriously love it-

It was very deep, I loved it:D

D'X Poor Loki! I love your take on Loki, and I think it's completely true. All he ever wanted was to be loved ;'(

Wow, great job! I just... poor Loki! He wanted so badly to be loved, but no matter how hard he tried, he realized the only way he would ever be truly noticed was to become a villain and be hated...

GOSHHHH such a good job with his development! But seriously, he really, really, really just needs a hug, right? haha! Enjoyed reading this! :)

MY GOD! MY FEELS! QAQ

Awwwh, poor Loki! This actually makes me feel sorry for him. Great job on this!:D

Wow. That was pretty awesome. Really loved this one.

Thanks for sharing!

This was incredible. Well-written and a well-devised study of Loki and his character. This was just...amazing. I wish I could say more.