| Reviews for Paradise |
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VeronicaElianna17 chapter 12 . 9/20/2017 Yyyyyyyyaà aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyhhhyhyyyyyyyyyyyyy! |
Hsnwjsiamamjsjshnsjoaqmosnxjhx chapter 12 . 5/2/2015 Is there a sequel? If there is I'll be more than glad to read it |
ginny1998 chapter 12 . 1/7/2015 hey that was amazing I love nat and steve together |
Guest chapter 12 . 8/29/2014 great story i just wonder wat tony did to annoy the hell out of thor or even odin himself (knowing tony he porbaly messed around the tech and was an annoying servant), loved the romanogers moments |
sarah chapter 7 . 8/24/2014 i think cap and Tasha make a good couple |
thainara.ferreira.161 chapter 12 . 4/21/2014 Loved! |
Muldoon22 chapter 7 . 7/20/2013 Mr. Romanoff? Lol. |
Guest chapter 8 . 3/4/2013 Your keyboard sticks. It's weird. (I know you have to be smart enough not to leave out letters if you can write a comprehendable story.) I always reveiw with an iDevice, so it doesn't happen, but some of my laptop's keys stick, so I can tell it's not you. -AMR |
ORgasmicPigeon chapter 12 . 1/24/2013 3 |
Guest chapter 12 . 1/18/2013 Oh my god i love this and your other storys |
Divinara chapter 10 . 12/3/2012 OH MY! My absolute favorite part: "A sudden THUD caused everyone's attention to turn to Tony. Or where he had been. Only his feet could be seen from behind the bar, indicating that he had lost consciousness." I actually visualized that scene and it had me in fits of giggles for a full five minutes. Poor Tony! Hopefully he's learned his lesson, but I suspect not. I hope you continue this story arc with another bet in the next story. - Becca |
Divinara chapter 7 . 12/3/2012 This is such a cute story. I never really imagined Natasha and Steve together but they make an adorable couple. I'm glad you decided to pursue this relationship. I just have two things to point out, one of which I've noticed throughout the story. First, a couple of lines from the bottom of this chapter, you turned Natasha into a man by addressing her as Mr. Romanoff ;). Second, I would probably recommend using the word "smirk" a lot less, or exploring other word options to relay what you are describing. I just feel that it is sprinkled very heavily throughout the story. Just a thought. Other than that, this is a fantastic story! Keep it up! - Becca |
imaAvenger chapter 12 . 9/16/2012 *claping* You never sease to amaze me with your writing skills:) I love your take on them & not many people write for them as a couple but i'm glad you do, you make reading fun:) |
BlueStrawberryIII chapter 12 . 9/16/2012 ;w; This is very good. Very good indeed. |
steph wwe fan chapter 12 . 9/16/2012 awww that's such a cute ending i loved it :D |