Reviews for The Party of Four
the Honeycomb chapter 6 . 1/9/2019
You know, I know this is old, but I don't like Molly in this installment. She seems... like she doesn't trust Sherlock. Like she doesn't know how his brain works. He says someone from his personal life isn't welcome and she contradicts and ignores his wishes. He says blunt and honest things and she gets all huffy and "I'm your wife! You must now treat me a certain way!" It comes off annoying. Maybe it's a temporary behavior?
Vangogh92 chapter 13 . 8/21/2018
I can’t believe it’s over. I loved this story and I feel so selfish wishing there was more since it was quite long. Just know that you captured and expanded the characters and story lines in a way that should get you a writer position. You truly surprised me on a few occasions, which is a hard feat. I wish we got to see molly’s pregnancy and sherlock’s attempt at fatherhood in this universe but I’m sure you were ready to retire the story. Thank you for sharing your talents with us, I hope you go back to writing one of these days. I’ll keep my eye out for you!
Vangogh92 chapter 12 . 8/21/2018
I don’t want it to be over, in one more chapter it’s over there’s not enough time for everything to happen!
Vangogh92 chapter 1 . 8/21/2018
Love it! Did you ever end up writing Sherlock and Molly’s wedding like you teased in the A/N? I looked but couldn’t find
Guest chapter 6 . 2/3/2018
I was right the female always making it look like the male is the asshole you are clearly a female writer only females have every female in the fanfics OCs included the victims never the males
Guest chapter 5 . 2/3/2018
Im confused what did he say thag was "bad" what he said was so true and Not bad just another fanfic where the female plays victim and gets upset and sherlock is made to look the bad guy ugh im so done
kaoruca chapter 1 . 11/26/2017
Nice ending, though I was longing for them meeting his mother. Hard chat but it would have been a remarkable one (taking into account your previous and wonderful portrayal). Thanks for posting
bee.zippy chapter 13 . 7/17/2017
A very nice sequel. It was an interesting mix of their early married life and some mystery solving. Thank you!
deemura chapter 13 . 7/4/2017
oh I love this story
deemura chapter 10 . 7/4/2017
beautiful.. I want this kind of domestic..
deemura chapter 9 . 7/4/2017
gosh, I can see why John always thought Sherlock as the wisest man he knows..
deemura chapter 2 . 7/4/2017
aaaah, Mary's case!
vampireluph chapter 5 . 4/7/2017
Of all the country and places across the world, you chose my country, Bali, Indonesia ! Love youuuu so much author-san!
Marion the Geek chapter 13 . 3/20/2017
A very nice follow up.
MissyH316 chapter 13 . 7/17/2016
Good story! I always enjoy happy endings, especially when they're preceded by a well-written story. The nod to "Sherlolly" was cute, as was the deerstalker hat with a veil for Molly. I'm sure this type of thing is among the reasons Sherlock and Molly got married privately: So that no one could barge in and pester them to let him or her plan their wedding! Could you imagine them rigging things to where our favorite couple would somehow have to walk down the aisle in "his & her" deerstalker hats? Woe to THAT person! LOL! ;-D Thanks for sharing!
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