As creepy as the idea of a mantis child is to me, this was.. so cute. ;w; I just love Caroline.

well done!

You have got to write more fir tgis stiry because it is really good and it is funny as well

Awwww baby mantis girl is adorableeeeee

*happy squee*

Anyway, yes. Just- YES. This fanfic is epic. You win. Everything. :3

Dude this is awesome I think you should continue this story.

You made amntis-men adorable. I don't know how you did it, but you did. Also, Caveline, which makes everything better just by existing.

Goodness, this was adorable. Baby mantis man is a qt. Never would have thought of that. xD And the Caveline fluffy bits are adorable too. Really, really nice job. I only had one criticism for the whole thing and that's just that you don't format dialogue correctly a lot of the time and it's a bit distracting, but that's easily fixed. I hope you write more stuff like this sometime. It's really lovely. :D