brilliant :)

ITS BEAUTIFUL! X'D

s'okay, babe, i prefer shorter drabbles anyway 'coz my attention span doesn't allow me to stay interested in longer oneshots (just look at my writing).
ugh, yes, tragic brotherly angst.
and that last line, though. JEEZ.

Your prose is too beautiful for any verbal description to be sufficient.

Pure Poetry. Beautifully Written. Absolutely Inspired.

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I think it's quite coherent! A little angstier than I usually like, but the final two lines make it all okay because they're amazing. Two simple sentences that sum up Rin and his struggles perfectly.