This is really good. Especially those last 3 sentences. Those that 3 sentences are what convinced me to add this to my favorites. :) :)

I love it!

happy writing

Bella and Blaise! Mainly because it's not a pairing you see often and I honestly can't see her being with Neville or Dean those are sibling relationships all the way it's just hard to imagine her with either of them

Nothing more dangerous than an angry overprotective parents.

It was a nice plot but I feel the story was lacking. The story ended abruptly, there was no development, bella and avengers should have had some bonding and none of the major issues were closed. I mean voldemort's still out there and add to the fact that hydra joined. I dont see how a story can end there. But its your story so i can only hope you decide to edit it in future.

I really want to read this but the huge chunks of text make it hard, can you go back and fix that as well as your grammar and spelling mistakes? You have such a good plot but I can barely read it!

you could pick a better singer than Brittany druggie,whore, STD Spears?

Love the ending.

I don't mind the blaise or dean thing but I would've li I ed her to have moments more with her family. All well lol.

Bella/Blaise sounds awesome

Im sorry. But what is this story actually about? Congratulations fanfiction. You've ruined stories.

mis?*

Reading this for the first time, I am quite confused. For one thing, you have Voldemort dying in 2015, meaning that your story is set in at least 2029 at this point. This makes the context very different, as the original harry potter story had voldemort dying around 1980 or so, as harry started school in 1991 or so if I remember correctly. times have changed, operating methods and access points have probably changed, and people have probably moved on. If natasha and barton married, and if they tried to have a kid at all, they would probably end up having another after the loss of their first one. Your Fury is very not-Fury-like, but that's relatively moot. Your progression is a bit chaotic and hard to follow sometimes, and your sentences tend to run on a bit.
That all being said, this is an interesting plot line to follow. It's a bit confusing, like i said, to understand exactly what all is happening, but I like the story youre telling. I will finish this story, and I know that this is rather all irrelevant since you finished it already, but I wanted to mention things that were bothering me and get them off my chest.
If you are still writing, which you may or may not be, you might want to think about crafting your paragraphs with purpose. Rather than just telling the story, shape it in a way that draws readers in. Super long paragraphs can make the reader lose interest, and delivering it in a couple of concise ones instead of one huge one will often work better. Just some food for thought(and some ranting). I will press on now!

...Luna?

I... Honestly can not see that. I can see Luna not befriending Maribelle, but Luna betraying her in such a manner? In the books, Luna doesnt do that under torture from BELLATRIX LESTRANGE. I just cant see her doing it willingly... Unknowingly, maybe but willingly?

I'm really excited about this, love the story line and must say I can't wait for more of this lovely piece xx