Reviews for The Founders Four
Mikhail.Scott chapter 1 . 7/15
PLEASE GET A BETA! The writing is disjointed and overly descriptive.
goldenzingy46 chapter 19 . 6/9
Hey, a small note - the Ministry was called the Wizards' Council up until 1702, I believe. Sorry about the correction, but I believe Salazar would've founded the Wizards Council instead?
wolfgirl232323 chapter 25 . 5/18
Oooh, this is really interesting, I love it! I can't wait to read what happens next, I'm so excited!
Guest chapter 25 . 4/21
I do hope that you eventually finish the promised sequel, as this ending is horrifyingly abrupt and even disorienting the way it is now. It still needed something to close it out, like Sal and Ric heading back towards the castle while teasing each other about whatever in the battle, or talking about how it was somehow anti-climactic...Just SOMETHING to make it feel more like the battle actually ENDED. Not to mention, there are way too many loose ends without a sequel.

So yeah-I hope you haven't given up on this story, and good luck finishing the sequel!
StormyFireDragon chapter 25 . 4/21
Oh you wicked person. I hope the sequel is up. This was the best story I have read in a long time. Kudos to you for excellent work.
StormyFireDragon chapter 24 . 4/21
WOW! That was an amazing twist. Love this story.
StormyFireDragon chapter 23 . 4/21
22222222222. Lol. Excellent chapter.
StormyFireDragon chapter 19 . 4/21
You big meanie. A cliffhanger? Excellent chapter.
StormyFireDragon chapter 16 . 4/21
Brilliantly written.
StormyFireDragon chapter 14 . 4/21
Excellent chapter. That was a great way to get everyone to like Salazar.
StormyFireDragon chapter 10 . 4/21
You might want to correct this chapter or a previous one. You stated in an earlier chapter that Neville was killed by Voldemort and later that there were no 6th year students. In this chapter you called out 3 sixth year students.
StormyFireDragon chapter 8 . 4/21
Major cliff hanger. Well written.
StormyFireDragon chapter 4 . 4/21
You wrote 1975. I believe you meant 1979. Otherwise excellent chapter.
StormyFireDragon chapter 3 . 4/21
This is a very interesting twist. Excellent work.
StormyFireDragon chapter 1 . 4/21
Beautiful start to the story. I look forward to reading more.
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