I love this story... is this the end? I hope not.

I've been wanting to write a review for this story for so long and now finally I am able to write it . This is honestly my favorite Paul and oc story , I just need to tell you how amazing of an writer you are , I've been captivated in each and every chapter you wrote , I've cried, laughed, smiled and went through every emotion that the characters portrayed in it. The thing I loved the most is how you shaped Paul's character , he has such a depth in his personality and the way his character has grown in this story made it more close to reality than I had felt in any other Paul stories . You showed him such a responsible guy who every girl can just dream of , which feels so much more real ,it was such a breath of fresh air than the normal Casanova or bully Paul which just goes around sleeping . Coming to Zara I can say she is my most favorite oc ever , the way you have written her character in such detailed and such simplified manner makes her character more beautiful , it was such a delight to read a female character who doesn't squel unnecessarily or doesn't have an overdramatic personality . By reading this story I can truly tell how good you are with character design , I mean Paul and Zara just compliment each other perfectly. I actually love the way you concentrate more on Paul and Zara rather than other things in background, I've read stories which starts with main characters and then just tangled up in cullens issue or other stuff which just makes the main characters sidetracked. Lolz I guess I wrote too much , but I just wanted to tell how much I love this story and how awesome your work is . I understand writing such efficient chapters take time , but I hope you'll update soon , till then see ya ! Good luck for whatever you gonna write next *I hope it's another Paul story/chapter* lolz bye...
-Razzy

I'm crying its so sad

Omg another gr8 chapter please dont leave it so long between chapters

Loving the story. Please keep it up and update soon.

Aww. I'm in love with this story. Keep it up. Update soon! I like happy Zara and Paul. Great work.

I hope you're going to finish the story...love it.

OMG what is taking so long PLEASE PLEASE update

ZOMG please please update

OMG IM SO HOOKED ON THIS PLEASE UPDATE

I love this chapter! Finally they are back together .
Update soon!

So is that it? No epilogue? Please let there be one. Or a sequel. I loved this story. You have no idea how thrilled I was for that kiss in the parking lot.

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS

Gah! The feels! The miscommunication! Wonderful! Keep writing! :)

Jesus Zara! Use your brain!