| Reviews for Team Beats! 2 |
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DORCAS SMASH chapter 1 . 9/18/2012 Yo bro, I'va been wanting to review this story for a long time, but I would always forget to do it. So, here I am now. Well to start things off, I would like to give you a headbutt (F*** Yeah) for making a really cool cross-over. I personally like how you kept TF2 game play to itsa original format on how everyone would just mess around and etc. While I've never really got into Angel Beats, I am amazed on how you crossed them over. A game that lets you re-spawn and a Anime world that lets you re-spawn as well, very clever. Now, I did find trying to read the story a bit confusing, with the banter between the Narrator and Author just a touch off from being crazy. I would like to humbly suggest that you find a better way for the Narrator and Author to converse, just my thoughts. All in all, I would like to shake your hand for making a hilarious story and I will wait for you next installment. |
The Layman chapter 1 . 7/13/2012 Wow, that's some cracky crack, sir. |