I love it!

Awwww! Psycho Daddy is proud. Psycho, but proud.

I love the whole concept of this!

Wow! Totally loved it! I like how you displayed Ra's with his usual calmness and somewhat intimidating air, but subtlety showed that he still has fatherly feelings and still loves his child. Really great. :)

Sa!

Ah, Ra's not being a completely and utterly worthless stage parent to a tiny!Talia. These sorts of things don't usually go well for writers (how can you keep someone like Ra's a in character when you need to give him Emotion?) but you pulled it off beautifully! He doesn't punish his daughter, he gets a better portrait painted of her and punishes the guards for almost losing his baby girl in a cave. But creepy and sweet, just the way it's supposed to be with this fussed up family! Yay for you!

PS: See, I told you I'd look over more stuff. :)

You really captured the relationship Ra's al Gul and Talia have - her determination to please and obey versus her free spirit, plus his dissaponitment at her disobeyment tampered with his pleasure at her skill. An interesting, in character work. Well done!

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