| Reviews for The General's Daughter |
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   Tropicallight chapter 1 . 7/27/2019 It's so cute! |
| TheNinjaSheep chapter 1 . 11/4/2018 Well a sequel... Edward's thoughts and confrontation with Mustang on the situation. I image it and burst into laugh. By the way, thank you. I was having a rough day and miraclesly came through this, now I feel better, so 3 |
| Itisher chapter 1 . 4/21/2018 Omg My first story of a Daddy Roy, and it's so cute! |
| Photohawk chapter 1 . 1/20/2018 This was absolutely adorable, funny and perfect. I've read a few Roy/Riza fics in the past few days and this is the first one with kids that I actually liked. No, I LOVED IT! |
| Selena92 chapter 1 . 11/28/2017 It was funny until the Ishval word. That was a sucker punch tobthe gut. Poor Roy. To be fair though, he WAS being overbearing. Poor Beth too. And Ben. Cute though how much he adores his daughter. Love their connection and how they apologised. So Ed's son, eh? I always thought Ed and Roy came to an understanding, perhaps even friends...It's Elric, btwThank you for this great story! |
| Seiba Artoria chapter 1 . 8/18/2017 I was giggling all the way and then Beth just said the Ishval word and I went "wow wait thats too much, gal" I felt the tension and was really sad but felt so touched with how it ends. Daddy Roy is literally the best. Thank you for this, I always enjoy Mustang family stories and you did great! Bless you. |
| ParrishGranger chapter 1 . 6/20/2017 pretty please can there be a sequel? This was so good |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/23/2017 Please write a sequel to this! I loved it so much! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2016 Oh my god this is my new fave fic it's beautiful |
| Hannah chapter 1 . 6/1/2015 I think Ed might be on Mustang's side on this. I'm pretty sure he's terrified that a mustang has his son under her thumb...it seems all too familiar...lol can i nag you about your reverberations fic? do update soon...don't shoot me, but i wanna see it to the finish. |
| themusicalbookworm chapter 1 . 2/24/2015 I'm reading this fic at 1:30 AM and everyone in my house is asleep and it's been SO DIFFICULT to stifle my laughter to keep from waking anyone. This was so funny. And unbelievably sweet. I love fluffy things like this. I know this is 3 years old, but if there is ever a sequel, I'm totally game to read it. This was stellar :D |
| Stardiouses chapter 1 . 1/26/2015 OMG, this was amazing. Every scene was hilarious and in character. This is the best 'married with children' fix that I've read about them. The ishvalan comment was like a 'WOWOWOW' moment. And the end was really sweet. |
| Royai lover chapter 1 . 10/21/2014 Please write a sequel |
| RisingXxLawliet chapter 1 . 7/23/2014 It's so sweet how overprotective Mustang is! And pretty hilarious, especially the mashed potatoes part. Great job! |
| Cavallo Alato chapter 1 . 6/26/2014 This is so sweet! Love how Ben turned out to be Ed's son! What a twist. Love the father-daughter affection. Too cute! I enjoy your Roy and Riza writing so much :D (and Maes for the son's name? Perfect, too.) |
