FMA:B was one of my quarantine binge watches (I’m dreadfully late to the party, I know) and from the start, I adored Alphonse. So, naturally, as soon as I had finished the series, I began to scour the internet for Alphonse content only to find that it was dreadfully limited, which drove me to - somewhere I haven’t actively looked for fic in a long time. And thank goodness I did! I was starting to worry that I was going to have to write my own fic, which would inevitably end up in my ever-growing pile of WIPs. And then! Like a miracle, I find this! Excellently written, beautifully detailed and developed characters, well thought additions and changes to the plot. It’s everything I could’ve hoped for! I know I’m also late to the party in terms of this story being written, but I just needed you to know how much I appreciate your talent and how much enjoyment this story has brought me. This is the most entertained and engaged I’ve been by a fic in a long time, and it was so wonderful to completely lose myself in reading again. It seems we might be of a similar age, based on when your notes were posted, and I have to say that you were a much better author in high school than I was! I hope you’ve been able to nurture your talent in the years since posting this, because this is really incredible work that you should be proud of! Excellent work, thank you so much for sharing it with us!

I dont know how many times I've read this story but I have to say that it's one of the best ff, it's incredibly well written and the character development it's amazing

God, not to be sexist, but girls are truly the best writers! Keep up the great work!

Possibly the best fanfic I have ever laid my eyes on. Thank you so much

YOU UNDERSTAND MY FEELINGS ABOUT DOGGIES!~

this was a bittersweet ending, but that Truth you didn't have him lose his memory of his years in the armor cause I would have cried when Al looked at Del only to see a stranger standing there TT_TT still kinda bummed that they won't ever have any biological children, but understandable. Great story!

Just finished re-read this And tbh I really miss delphonse it's weird

I know that this is a very deep part of the story, and it isn’t really a laughing matter...but I can’t stop thinking about them (Marcoh, May, and Delilah) being the Doctor team. I see them healing the world when they work together.

I’m sad it’s over I wish there was a sequel I would definitely read it

“I had a mental disability and Doctor Marcoh healed it with—"

I know this is fanfiction but you can’t cure a mental disability...I’m kinda offended I have a mental disability I have 2 a learning disability and I forgot the name of the other disability and I’m going to keep reading because I really like this story I just wanted to let that out hope you aren’t mad or anything

Twist the knife why don’t ya, Envy...

YAY THEY GOT A HAPPY ENDING! I know in your notes you said they would, but during all that angst (which I really liked! Very unique!) it was kind of hard to see how they would be happy ;-;
This was really nice though, and I enjoyed reading it!

LING IS HERE YAY!

God, Izumi is awesome!

I'm loving this tbh