| Reviews for Black Tears |
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johnnyrocker76 chapter 18 . 4/10/2018 It's a shame you never finished this. I thought the melding of Skyrim elements was rather well done. |
Rufael chapter 18 . 3/11/2016 DAMN IT ALL! I want to see what was going to happen next :((((( |
Rufael chapter 16 . 3/11/2016 Aah. An almost kiss. Damn it :)) |
Rufael chapter 15 . 3/11/2016 Oh wow. Akuha's dream was... beautifully written. It reminded me of an episode from JL, when Superman was having a very convincing dream that he was on Krypton with hiswife and son, that the planet never blew up... that Brainiac never betrayed them... but he heard Batman's voice calling his name. And then he realised all that was a lie. And he felt so much pain having to let it go. It was all he ever wanted in life. Not the power of a God, but living a normal, happy life with his family. And the way Akuha kissed Jasmin and when he looked at her again, she was dead and in pieces in front of her... even i would have hated the human race for this. A very nice chapter. I loved it. Getting close to the last one. Already sad about not seing how it will end :( |
Rufael chapter 7 . 3/10/2016 wow. just...wow :) |
Rufael chapter 6 . 3/10/2016 Dude, i love Talia more and more. Also i like what you did with Akuha's personality :). Pls don't stop writing |
Enalton418 chapter 18 . 1/15/2016 This is one of my favorite chapters so far. You've really flushed out Talia's character and Gin is growing to be more then the simple minded pervert the original series makes him out to be. Keep up the good work, this story has gone above and beyond fan fiction expectations and honestly has more substance then the actual manga. |
Karharot chapter 18 . 9/11/2015 I just read through all of Assassin and Black Tears chapters in one go and I think this story is really interesting. I hope you didn't feel like it became too complex to continue because I would certainly be interested in seeing how things develop from here. One small thing that caught my attention in the last chapters - is there a reason why Akuha stopped calling Tsukune "Tsuk"? I liked that nickname she gave him and the way she used it. Yeah, my attention is drawn to really odd details. |
panthertats chapter 18 . 1/8/2015 this is flipin awsome please keep going |
Velshard chapter 18 . 11/12/2014 Rechtschreibung wird siegen! Mögest du an die Box als Ketzer verbannt werden! Siege Spell! The Grammar Nazi Joking aside this was a good chapter that I enjoyed simply because it explored Ginei's character and even talia's motivations and thoughts a bit more. The chapter is somewhat of a filler chapter but it does give some info that will likely be critical in the future while neatly explaining Akuha and Tsukune's newly acquired talents, which also makes me worry about what will become of them and the others that were swallowed by Alucard in the future. |
Velshard chapter 17 . 10/12/2014 Well Snit. A very interesting chapter, but oh boy have things gotten ugly and dangerous for the people in the human world. I hope everything turns out okay and I'm hoping for one Helluva fight between Yolnabrii & Volliivmir, I'm suyre the rest of the groups reaction to Yuna taking on her true form will be pretty funny. |
chimera0205 chapter 17 . 10/11/2014 I dont know why but yuna reminds me of star fire from teen titans oh and great chapter |
Velshard chapter 16 . 9/18/2014 Nice to see your still writing and felt like working on this story again. While rather short this was a nice slow and fairly relaxing chapter with a little bit of character development and exploration that was appreciated. Take care and I hope to see you update again soon. |
guy345 chapter 15 . 4/22/2014 holy crap this story if just so freaking awesome, continue!, btw in the ery end i would like for akuha and tsukune to end up together, but this is personal XD. |
Aster's Descendants chapter 15 . 3/26/2014 You've got me hooked on this series. I especially love the way you get an in depth look at why the characters act the way they do. On a side note, for Gyokuro, this is why you don't screw with people's heads. |