Ohhh. -

Not all geisha perform sexual acts you know. Their sexual and romantic life can be separate from their job, as most geisha do things like entertaining; meaning dancing, serving food/drink, and being talked too among other things.

i like the story until this far but as i know geisha and brothel's culture things, i can say u need to research more. geisha not selling their body so easily and man prostitute not called Geisha. Geisha have pride they not some low slut

You're simply awfull. Please don't write anymore

no epilogue where they live?ω；)

Huwaaaa no epilogue where they live?ω；)

Your story was good but you need a good beta some od the parts was a little unreasonable and like some stated it was kinda confusing when at first u said that shizuo was unexperienced but later stated that he was very experenced

But never the less the plot and concept is good and i will be looking forward to the original ending

Hi! Please do post the original end! I would very much like to read it and im sure many others do too!

I get you might be busy with life but it would really be nice if you could post the end for me and many others.
Thank you so very much!

And i started and finished the story today and although i havent been with this story since the biggining i would like to say this is a very refreshing story to read as there is not many stories with AUs.
Thank you very much again!

I have a request can you make a shizaya and harry potter crossover? Everyone is looking for a story like that and the ones that have been posted stop after 2 to 4 chapters

yeh you kinda lost me at shiix iza so I pretended it was a wet dream beteen shiuo and izaya

This was so painfully wonderful.
I've been hoping to read this for weeks, and now I'm proud this caught my eye.

I knew it. Those two had no way of escaping. Poor couple. Poor Izaya.
Though this ending is touching. Nice. I loved it~
Thank you for writing.

I'm happy that Shizuo and Izaya didn't die though. If they did I would be crying so hard and I would not get over their death for like a week. At least they end up happy together

The end, omg, the end!
I'm not a fan of 'open' endings, but I enjoyed this one a lot. Probably the freedom they both have isn't the better, but at least they have each other.
Amazing work, thank you!

...I'm disappointed in this ending
seriously...what is this? It's like u rushed the end and made up something without much thought on
Sorry, I think I've been saying negative comments, so I should add that the beginning of the story and the theme/concept is pretty good, that's why I kept reading. But it just gets more illogical and I am disappointed. Hope you will get more experience and write better and better in the future! It'd be beneficial if you can find a good beta. Good luck!

You really need a beta...;_;
And how is Shizuo so experienced and know what to do? It's his first time! did Izaya know again? Your grammar mistakes and awkward sentences are hindering my reading and understanding of the scene. It's such a pity...u need a beta (once again!)
There were a lot of illogicalness here and I felt like you really need a few more paragraphs to develop the turn of events. And it was such a good story development too before! I was expecting more... I know a lot of ppl only cares about the smut, but I'm like the Shizuo in ur story; I actually care about the details and story ;)
just some constructive feedback here. I enjoyed ur story, but instances of illogicalness had been bothering me for a long time...will continue to read now.