OMG, awesome story, Tri Fani :)
I love your way of writing.
Also in KFP2, when Po said "So hardcore that you don't feel anything." I looked like if she suddenly remembered someone or something.
Nice story, very realistic. Nice Job.

Is there more? Great story btw. Make a sequel? Please?

Lovely! Such a wonderful ending for a wonderful story, although sad, it was just...awesome (just like Po:P) Wow, I really, really, really love your work, it's FANTASTIC.

*wipes tears* oh...my...god...*sniff* p-poor Mao, he was a nice little guy...

That was really scary, but I liked how the back story was detailed.

Wow...really...just...wow...awesome

ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Oooh, the suspense! I love this story already! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

po! it's po. he had met tigress. po and tigress as cubs. if only tigress had a chance to introduce her name to po. master shifu came in the wrong time. this is beautiful, m4dg4rl. tragedy, but beautiful.

no! you killed mao! no! why, mao. why? he is so young. he saved tigress. and he is dead. this is unfair. life is so unfair.

crying. i'm crying. the wolf, his story is sad. he lost his wife and children. mao's parents are wrong. it's their fault. now mao will be in danger because of them. listen to me, wolf! mao has no relate to you and your problem. just leave him alone. he is inconnent.

that's why tigress hugs po in kung fu panda 2. she is remembering mao. her friend. when po calls tigress hardcore, it reminds her to mao too. mao, don't go. you are going to dead. come back here little panther. stay in jade palace and be safe. what? you're not listening me? hey... hey... hey... i'm still talking to you. don't go. ah! damm it!

mao. he is cute. tigress. she is adorable. are they going to meet po? what the relationship between mao and the wolf? is that wolf the murderer?

Touching. Really splendid. You should write more, especially your battle scenes, they really kept me reading on. Like what i said earlier, its the slight grammer errors, but still very good. I could really feel the emotions for this chapter.

"Are you sad?" asked the Panda cub.

Really, its down to basic child's innocence, that he'll just ask questions like that, but its what makes children so beautiful, what makes Po so beautiful.

Keep writing. I'm hoping there'll be a sequel for this. Like how Tigress finally realises that she's met Po when she's still young or something. How she reacts, etc etc.

Honestly... the story... was breathtaking. It seems like an official prequel to kfp. Especially how you used the story to show how this and that happened in kfp and kfp2.
However, there are a few grammatical errors i found. When you said "i hope we could be friend" its supposed to be "i hope we can be friends" and near the beginning "you would may still live" should be "you may still live" or "you woukd still live"
There are a few more, but i cant copy and paste right now, so i dont remember all of them.
Despite the errors, you are truly a great author.
I would also kindly like to point out that the dialouge is kind of short in this chapter, and very simple.
Im not an author yet, so i cant do better, but i still hope i helped in anyway. C:
I would also like to praise the last chapter, and i like how Mao died without any final words, it was very original, and increased the emotion tugging dialouge of the chapter, and most of the story.
Thank you for this wonderful story. It was very heart touching.

Good story! Sad, but amazing!