Reviews for I'll make you Fall in Love with Me
brittanastanxx chapter 5 . 4/17/2019
Awesome chapter! Do you ever find out what exactly happened with Wes and David in David’s bedroom?
Gabriela GleekLover 36 chapter 14 . 4/4/2013
i loved this fanfic! it's my favorite niff fanfic
Separate Entity chapter 5 . 2/22/2013
I loved the Painting Flowers duet.
Separate Entity chapter 3 . 2/22/2013
You probably should put more spaces between when different people are talking.
Gah, Nick interrupted Kurt and Blaine!
Separate Entity chapter 2 . 2/22/2013
Poor Nick, stuck in the friendzone.
Can you explain the three six thing?
Separate Entity chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
This is looking good!
Emiily.23 chapter 14 . 1/23/2013
Wait is it really the end? nooo :( this story is so perfect that i don't want it to finish, not now, not ever! hahaha.

Anyway, i am happy there will be a epilogue and also a sequel...*thumbs up*

I have a little question...Jeff's sweaty hair was because...you know...they did it? I hope yes! hahahaa

Niff fluffiness ! yaaay! hahhaa.

See you next weekend then. Have a nice day

Niff you !
Kriss chapter 12 . 1/14/2013
OMG I LOVE YOU FOR PUTTING IF MY HEART WAS A HOUSE! -MEGA HUGGLE GLOMP-
Emiily.23 chapter 13 . 1/13/2013
awww! so nice my babies! Can't wait for another update.

Happy 2013 :D

see ya soon!
Percival Jones chapter 2 . 12/12/2012
Edits: () – add, replace, / / - remove, [] suggestion, reconstruction of the sentence.

(The) next morning (,) [An annoyed Jeff woke up and turned his alarm clock off.]

[He then started to do his morning routine. He got up, went for a shower, dressed up, styled his hair with gel and then went to the cafeteria for breakfast.]

He glanced all four of them and narrowed his eyebrows.

"Nick (isn’t) here yet?" (the) blond [asked carefully].

Weird thing was,/that/ he and Nick were roommates but Nick wasn't in his bed (that) morning.

That's just the first few lines of this chapter...

Now, not to sound cocky or arrogant but you won't get too much readers or reviewers if the story has too much grammar and sentence construction mistakes... So you really have to read up and review your English grammar so that people can appreciate your fic. People can look past a small typo or a confusion with past perfect and past progressive tensing, and maybe even some punctuation but when it accumulates in occurrence, it just becomes irksome to read.

Because from the point of view of a semi- Grammar Nazi, instead of looking for the nice plot of the story, i end up looking at grammar mistakes that i should correct.

I'm sorry dude but just had to say it. Improve your grammar and writing style first and let it mature
Percival Jones chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Some grammar stuff and typos (well, just some of it since i didn't plan to do all of them...)

() - insert, replace / / - remove
I would like to see it more often and I would keep staring it all day long.

not to mention /about/ your singing voice.

ahs anybody seen Blaine?" /* typo

"He said that (he'll come) here soon, like, (fifteen) minutes ago, /* actually if you used passed by here, it may sound better but that's just me.

Anyway, do you have a betareader? because as much as i wanna read a Niff fic, the errors just irk me.

Sorry but it has to be said.
hottie chapter 12 . 12/10/2012
ahhhhhh, soooo effing hot sexy b*tches,AWSOME SMUT
Emiily.23 chapter 12 . 11/26/2012
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaww! I can die now! hahaha! that was soooooooo sweet! Really great chapter :) can't wait for moreeee :) Kisses
Emiily.23 chapter 11 . 11/23/2012
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! OMG OMG OMG! Nick is really the sweetiest thing alive and Jeff...My goodness! He did say that he loved him aaaaaaaaaaaaww! I'm dying rigth now, just for u to know ;) hahah.

Great chapter! I Can't wait for an update and all the smut :) :D :)

See u! Kisses sweetie :)
Emiily.23 chapter 10 . 11/13/2012
AAAAAAAAAAAAHhhhhhh! i can't wait to read the next chapter! please please please update soon! OMG what happened to Nick? Has Jeff's dad something to do with it? aaaaaaaaahh... awesomeee! I really liked, no other word! Kisses sweetie :)
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