Reviews for Thunder
anonmous chapter 1 . 2/8/2018
okay
Guest chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Please continue this please please please
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Where the rest.
spezria26 chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
That. Was. Awesome.

The last line was incredibley haunting-ish
I think you did a really good job with Jade, making her a bitch rather than like... super nice or something idiotic like that. Good job
Goven chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
WOW will u continue this story? I really hope so cuz I really wanne know who it goes on :) and I like how u writte :) btw I really find it good how u nail jade's character and I ope u wirtte more and continue this story :) btw sorry for my bad english
trypophobica chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
OOOOO.

I'm happy now.
Jeremy Shane chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
Legendary Story
John Ryan chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
From somebody who has read an awful lot of Jori fan-fiction, you should definitely continue this. The tension is perfect and would make for an interesting sequel.
souLion chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Continue this please. It is so good
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
this is really good. Poor Tori! I feel for them both. :)
vanlicious chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
omg you need to continue this
Vegawest chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
I loved it, no one was ooc and I wish you'd continue because I'd read on! C:
Just Bev chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
plz keep going
Sam chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
most of the time I'm too fucking lazy to review. unless I read something that I would feel guilty about just reading and leaving. this was a work of art and I say "more!" more from you my dear!
MellyHorror-Salvatore-Northman chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
I don't think Jade was ooc, if she was it wasn't really too much. Great story.
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